Comments | phalanges_d: "Leave out all the rest" 4/?

phalanges_d

"Leave out all the rest" 4/?

Feb 20, 2011 06:36

Fandom: Brenda/Sharon
Rating: R
Spoilers: hmm.. well, since its all in my head, non really, but i guess it makes sence if you think its set after the christmas episodes
Disclaimers: haha yes, I own Sharon, and Brenda, TNT and oh wait, reality just kicked in- telling me no, that was me daydreaming...

Summary: Final Preparations before Brenda and Sharon ( Read more... )

Comments 14

frenhu February 20 2011, 09:03:52 UTC

"Oh sweet lord she was in trouble."

Hahaha, she is, indeed!! :)

Wonderful chapter, can't wait to see this night finally come in your story! Don't leave us hanging too long :)

phalanges_d February 21 2011, 01:36:43 UTC

Thank you:D *next chapter is def in the works!*

mibehl February 20 2011, 10:09:00 UTC

So how much do I love this chapter &hearts,

To be honest I should be getting this room ready to paint but these Ikea shelves are getting the better of me - it is amazing how difficult it is to get them OFF of the wall when you don't have an electric screwdriver. LOL. LJ breaks helps immensely.

*wants more of Sharon & Brenda in hot outfits*

phalanges_d February 21 2011, 01:40:33 UTC

:O Lol! Ok, don't let Ikea get the best of you! Just, go airlock on the screws arses, and then wear the armani skirt (was gonna comment on that one;)) and then go Sharon sharon mode- cause we both know she always gets what she wants in the end;)

I'll try and bring you somthing that'll give their clothes some justice;)

mcdonnellstreep February 20 2011, 14:06:42 UTC

omgs, from the first sentence, I knew this was going to be a great chapter!! These two women "cooperating" in this way, is just hilarious! And this was a great written chapter! It's teasing and funny and hot and great, and I think this should be an ep on the closer- i could totally see it happen (a)
xx

phalanges_d February 21 2011, 01:41:35 UTC

Well aren't you sugar with spinning on the side? :P <3

lindy999 February 20 2011, 15:37:32 UTC

OK, this was just too cute...going back to read a 2nd time...I love the reactions of the "boys" when Sharon walked in in that dress. I can just picture it, especially Provenza. Now, when are we going to get to the "good" stuff?!?!?! LOL

lindy999 February 20 2011, 15:38:59 UTC

Oh yeah, and how much do I LUV the part when Sharon hands Brenda the wrong bag...I was laughing so hard I was crying.

phalanges_d February 21 2011, 01:43:49 UTC

You read it TWICE?! :O Wow, i feel all giddy here!
Oh, I've always had a soft spot for Provenza and his stunts=)

Good stuff coming up! (Or, hopefully I'll manage to make it "good" enough for your satisfaction!)

madampresident February 20 2011, 16:02:17 UTC

I loved the boys/Brenda racing to get to touch Sharon to put the wire on her! I wouldn't mind getting in on a little of that too! ;)

I love Mel knowing Sharon's clothes. I have a friend like that, we just call each other and it's like "what should I wear?" it's great. Your characters are really well written, they have good depth.

phalanges_d February 21 2011, 01:47:34 UTC

..you and me both... :P lol!

I think we all got that friend! As a matter of fact, I've got one right here beside me now:P (She just made the comment: that's my pants! well, she's wearing mine, so.. ) :P

Thank you for the comment on the characters, that means a LOT to me! <3