Comments | phalanges_d: "Leave out all the rest" 6/6

phalanges_d

"Leave out all the rest" 6/6

Mar 09, 2011 01:35

Fandom: Brenda/Sharon
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: hmm.. well, since its all in my head, non really, but i guess it makes sence if you think its set after the christmas episodes
Disclaimers: haha yes, I own Sharon, and Brenda, TNT and oh wait, reality just kicked in- telling me no, that was me daydreaming...

A/N 1: Thanks to everyone who has commented on ( Read more... )

Comments 13

wildwildwood March 9 2011, 01:46:10 UTC

I'm still reeling from the 'last-ness' of this, so I think you know my thoughts on would people still be interested... So, check me down for a 'yes please' with a side order of 'please ma'am I'd like some more' (Which is what I suspect Brenda might also say to Sharon in the next chapter, correct? :)

On that note - AMAZING - I think this was my favorite chapter yet, and NOT just for the sexy!fun!times! but because they kind of opened up and became human for one another. Also, I think I forgot to tell you but "‘-Oh for heaven’s sake! Raydor!’" HAS to be the greatest Brenda line every written in fic just because the entire set-up of it is so hysterical and you can just imagine the delivery of it!

PS - WAYwayWAY too kind and now you made me blush!

phalanges_d March 10 2011, 20:46:38 UTC

Human? Don't tell me Brenda's alien realization didn't throw you off! *gasps!*

Frankly, I'm not entirely sure how I'm gonna answer this one, cause you've left me blushing and all I really CAN say, is thank you=) (Yes, you're allowed to picture Brenda saying that, but take away the irony and the 'stick you know what up you know where'-scenario- since it's actually coming from me and I mean it)

I feel like karma is gonna kick my ass if I leave them right where they are now- buuut, I made a deal with myself; I'm gonna have to have some clue where to take this before thinking about starting another chapter. (Wanna brainstorm? :P) I'll probably manage to twist it around to a certain pair of women being trapped in a sahara sandstorm if I start with no direction.

wildwildwood March 10 2011, 21:17:00 UTC

The last time I read about a Saharian sandstorm, it was in The English Patient and THAT didn't end well for ANYONE involved - so I suggest we avoid that route if we can...

phalanges_d March 10 2011, 21:31:48 UTC

what if... I brought in a chameleon with the ability to transform them to butterflies for the sole purpose to use their wings to blow the sand away?

(NOW see my point?!)

lindy999 March 9 2011, 02:25:52 UTC

Oh, no, no, no. You can't end it here. Plaese no, pleeeaaassseee!!!!

phalanges_d March 10 2011, 20:48:57 UTC

*evil grin!* First of all, just wanted to say thanks for sticking with the story till the end;) I'm not entirely sure that will be the last of this thingy- but-

yes, no, or, well, I, there could be more, and now I'm rambling.

caity_love March 9 2011, 07:19:18 UTC

Umm.... This SO cannot be the end!! That is almost CRUEL.

But it is just absolutely amazing!!!

phalanges_d March 10 2011, 20:50:51 UTC

I'm rethinking some of my decitions to end it here- but I think the other half of my brain has an idea- it just won't let the other part of my brain know about it just yet. All better?
*or simply confused? cause I relate to that*

frenhu March 9 2011, 10:53:08 UTC

I'm with the others, don't you dare finish this story here!!! :)

Fantastic chapter, tho I don't know how they could handle that much of a booze :D

phalanges_d March 10 2011, 20:54:12 UTC

I know right? I'm left to believe someone just said there was alcohol in those shots, but what do I know?

I'm glad you liked it;) And, I think its safe to say that there will be some more, I just don't know exactly WHEN- or what, or how. but hopefully I will soon.

moodweather March 10 2011, 06:16:59 UTC

Oh it hurts!!! I made the (stupid) mistake of trying to read this on the tram and had to stop because I was getting all these weird looks...mainly because I was sitting here grinning like a crazy person! The idea of these two in a drinking contest, and then for you to write it so well ... oh man, I should have known I was a goner. Agree with others, more please :D

phalanges_d March 10 2011, 20:59:47 UTC

Oh no! or, yay! (Two conflicting thoughts fighting here- happy you took the time to read it on the tram, the other thought; I've been there- there really isn't any great way to melt into the crowd in a gigglefit) Thank you for laughing:P My work here is done!

(That was figuratively speaking, I think there will be more to this that what you have been given till now;))