new poem

Feb 20, 2006 16:01

In the past hour or so I have written a new poem.  It is called "The Song of Man."  Please let me know what you think of it. 
I see a man standing on a hill.

He is singing.

As I listen I rejoice because I know his song,

But also I have never heard it before.

AS the man sings, life springs up around him,

Trees sprout from the barren ground,

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spanishgreg February 21 2006, 18:53:30 UTC
Does this poem have religious implications?

Good poem.

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phantom_shift February 21 2006, 19:13:58 UTC
Yes it does. Any idea on who the man is??? Do you like the poem?

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