{one-shot} Let's make this clear.

Nov 09, 2009 02:04


Let's make this clear.
→ Jonghyun/Key; PG-13
You've already captured me.
a remix of ficcy's A Long List of Homosexual Kisses by Kim Heechul for JongKey fanfiction remix.

I cannot say that I was ready for this. )

!fanfic, !oneshot, p: jonghyun/key

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sweet ringdingdong_jy November 9 2009, 08:24:38 UTC
this is so sweet! ((:
the ending makes me

... )

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Re: sweet ontokki November 9 2009, 08:26:43 UTC
Thank you for reading :D

I laughed while writing the ending.

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inucrazzes November 9 2009, 09:03:03 UTC
Haha So Cute =D

I only like some JongKey , And I Like Yours =]

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ontokki November 9 2009, 09:08:28 UTC
aww I'm flattered! Thank you :3

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hp_groupie November 9 2009, 10:18:33 UTC
D'aw! This was cute. AND OMG I KNOW. I'M SLEEPING, I'M SLEEPING...BUT I SAW NEW JONGKEY AND HAD TO READ. >__<

GOODNIGHT FOR REAL NOW.

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ontokki November 9 2009, 10:27:10 UTC
dsjfasdf I was gonna ask you why aren't you in bed LOL ♥

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siaht November 9 2009, 13:16:46 UTC
I think this turned out your best JongKey so far. For some reason. So great. Everything flowed so naturally.

Jonghyun shakes his head, “No no no, you know how he gets when he’s furious and I say sorry to him. He’s all like ‘if sorry works then why do we need the police?’.” Jonghyun sticks his arms on his hips, imitating Kibum.

LOLMAO.

Ten seconds into this kiss, Heechul regrets it, regrets it a lot. It must have been ages since Jonghyun has kissed someone, Heechul thinks.

THIS IS SO HEECHUL TO THINK SMTH LIKE THIS ABOUT POOR JONGHYUNNIE.

Kibum sighs, “Why am I mad again?”

THAT IS ALSO SO KIBUM I LOVE IT, all he knows is that he has to stay mad at Jonghyun for something and that Jonghyun has to make up for whatever. IC wut u tryin'a get thar -> this was meant for Key lol xD

The last part when they kiss is superb. It's so obvious Key had been waiting forever for one kiss from Jonghyun yet there's nothing that actually says that, it's just there, all over ( ... )

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ontokki November 10 2009, 00:12:19 UTC
I think this is my best too and I didn't even mean for it to be anything dazzling XD

Ugh thank you for the lovely comment Dani ;_; I feel good about this thanks to you♥

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kaiahh November 9 2009, 13:27:29 UTC
awww this is really good :3

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ontokki November 10 2009, 00:12:34 UTC
thank you :D

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