Comments | phantomsangel: LOST fic: Knowing

phantomsangel

LOST fic: Knowing

Jan 02, 2010 02:28

Title: Knowing
Characters: Jacob, Man in Black, mention of Ben
Rating: PG
Words: 600

( They both already know it... )

Comments 10

madeline_may January 2 2010, 17:51:33 UTC

Bloody amazing, as always. Idgaf what you say, I'm pimping this.

Favourite line:

What happens next could last a moment or a lifetime but it's all the same to Jacob. Just as he knows the grains of sand, he knows the pangs in Ben's heart. Jacob knows each hour between the then and now. But it is not yet Ben Linus' time. Not yet, and Jacob slips one last pang into Ben's heart.

Just beautiful. I love love LOVE your writing style.

GIVE ME MORE

I mean... GIVE ME MORE.

♥

phantomsangel January 2 2010, 18:02:30 UTC

GIMME GIMME MOAR GIMME MOAR.

Ok, now I've pictured Jacob singing Britney Spears, thank you, MM.

There is so much that could be written about Jacob and his Frenemy, I feel. It's just hard to formulate it into something WE MORTALS can understand. ;)

Thank you for reading, dear. <3

ada_bug January 2 2010, 18:06:35 UTC

:3

:3

:3

Beautiful as always darling, this was fantastic. I love the differences you drew between the two, and not just in the good/evil realm but the fact that Jacob is stronger and more knowledgable than our MIB. I imagine this would drive him crazy. Anyways, fave line: It was a beautiful day for the end to begin.

Idk, gave me goosebumps man.

x3

phantomsangel January 2 2010, 18:15:12 UTC

Thank you thank you thank youuuuu.

There is such an interesting dynamic between the two, and I suppose it could be interpreted many ways. I hope we get more of their backstory with the new season. JACOB FLASHBACK? I THINK SO.

Although, lol. His story would take centuries to tell.....~MYSTERIOUS~

bluerosetorn January 2 2010, 19:25:56 UTC

I'm glad I woke up to this, bb! Twas lovely. :')

phantomsangel January 2 2010, 19:32:47 UTC

Aw, thank you for reading dear! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

khaman January 2 2010, 20:58:21 UTC

Hey, I liked that. A nice fleshing out of some of the undercurrents there. Nicely written.

phantomsangel January 2 2010, 22:43:40 UTC

Thanks so much! The nice thing about not really knowing much about Jacob and his enemy is that writers are pretty free to interpret their relationship. It will be interesting to see how our thoughts change once we know more about them.

Thank you for reading and commenting!

starfoozle January 2 2010, 21:32:07 UTC

"It was a beautiful day for the end to begin."

I really loved this. Excellent job.

phantomsangel January 2 2010, 22:42:34 UTC

Thanks very much! I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.