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phantomsangel

BIRTHDAY FICS!!

Jan 25, 2010 00:04

You know what? Today is the wonderful and charming madeline_may's birthday!!! And she deserves all sorts of wonderful things. I'm not so sure this counts, but I've written two fics for her.

I LOVE YOU MADDY HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

Title: Time
Characters: Richard, Ben, Jacob
Rating: PG
Note: FOR MADELINE_MAY'S BIRTHDAY! Idea from the same, who wondered if Ben had been ( Read more... )

ben, fic, lost, lost fic, writing

Comments 8

madeline_may January 25 2010, 05:17:33 UTC

OH MY GOD.

Laura you are amazing. This is a WONDERFUL birthday present. You blow me away. I love you so so so much!!!

phantomsangel January 25 2010, 06:53:53 UTC

I LOVE YOU TOO OMG.

I am so glad you liked them. <3 <3

I hope you have a wonderful birthday. YOU DESERVE IT.

cut_thestring January 27 2010, 10:08:18 UTC

These are really good! :-)

I do believe Jacob always knew he would (had to?) die in the end, somehow. Like Dumbledore in HP! But not quite :P

And the Ben & Juliet one is spot on, especially this: If Ben was pathetic it meant that she was just the same for once believing he was not. I really do think the Juliet we know now was shaped by her previous three years on the island, and that whole Ben dynamic.

phantomsangel January 29 2010, 00:53:37 UTC

Yes, the more and more I think about it, the more I believe that perhaps his death is part of Jacob's over reaching plan. I'm hoping, that in the end, Ben will be redeemed or at least viewed as something of a hero.

I agree about Juliet. I believe her thoughts were very complicated when she first arrived on the Island. It's interesting to think how her interactions with Ben (and the rest of the Others) affected her.

Thank you for reading and commenting!

woodshavings January 29 2010, 00:45:59 UTC

I adore both of these :3

Plus, you portrayed Juliet's thoughts in such a way that it's believable.

phantomsangel January 29 2010, 00:51:15 UTC

Thank you! I imagine Juliet's feelings were very complicated when she first arrived on the Island.

Thank you for reading and commenting.

weatheredlaw February 1 2010, 02:59:26 UTC

-drools- LOVE IT. These are great. I really can see Jacob knowing about his own death. It makes sense.

phantomsangel February 1 2010, 03:53:43 UTC

I think Jacob knows more than we originally thought. And he was far too calm when Ben walked in there to kill him..

Thanks for reading and commenting!