(Untitled)

Nov 10, 2008 10:28

The pines ( Read more... )

Leave a comment

Comments 22

aileenfan November 10 2008, 09:47:23 UTC
Very good piece of J/E story:) I'm proud of Ennis - finally some wise decision:DDD *happy dance*

Reply

phare_bzh November 12 2008, 11:46:47 UTC
thanks a lot, It was a little amusement for me, I'm glad you liked it!
Alex

Reply


The Pines bmshirts November 10 2008, 11:17:49 UTC
Nice one-shot. You start out with the same old Ennis, afraid and angery at Jackmfor always wanting more. At last he's realized that Jackmis right. Without each other, they live miserable lives, existing in marriages that do nothing for them either emotionally or physically with women they care nothing for anymore. And so Ennis said yes.
Thanks. Carole

Reply

Re: The Pines phare_bzh November 12 2008, 11:47:49 UTC
Thanks a lot Carole, yes I tried to work a little on Ennis' revelation about his unhappy life.
Now I'm working to another long fic.
Best regards, Alex

Reply


annabuffy November 10 2008, 12:01:51 UTC
Nice story. It's nice to see Ennis took a honest look at himself and said yes to Jack.

Reply

phare_bzh November 12 2008, 11:48:41 UTC
thank you, I'm happy you find this little piece worth commenting.
Lovely cat, too!
Alex (owner of a feline clan)

Reply


fl1789 November 10 2008, 12:48:58 UTC
“If you think we can really start something together, well, I guess we could try….”

Awww...that was music to my ears ; DDDD

lovely writing, you made me start my week with a grin

thank you

fl.

Reply

phare_bzh November 12 2008, 11:49:44 UTC
I'm very happy you started the week well, in fact I was eager to post it, after different troubles for me & Sam
bye bye and happy Wednesday, Alex

Reply


torry28 November 10 2008, 18:29:04 UTC
I'm glad Ennis was able to look at himself and see his way was leading to more pain and loneliness only with Jack all the time could he be complete.
Its a nice short story tells a lot about both their unhappiness and what to do about it and Ennis finally took the reins in hand and went for it.
Thank you, and thanks to Sam for making it possible for us to enjoy it in English.
Hugs
Torry

Reply

phare_bzh November 13 2008, 16:00:09 UTC
HALLO TORRY,
thanks a lot for reading and enjoying my little DIVERTISSEMENT.
I took the inspiration one day away in the pines and wrote a small piece.
Best regards, Alex

Reply


Leave a comment

Up