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Mar 02, 2007 18:10

Title: I Can’t Lose You Again ( Read more... )

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anonymous March 2 2007, 19:59:29 UTC

Beautifully written - tinged with a touch of sadness but with hope too.

Thank you

phare_bzh March 5 2007, 08:20:18 UTC

thanks for your comment, I hope I was able to convey different emotions in this ch, it isn't easy because the situation they are in is quite complicated.
best regards, Alex

Won't be losing him... cwby30 March 2 2007, 20:45:49 UTC

Afternoon.

Nice follow-up to their decision to go to Lightning Flat. Glad Jack's Mom greeted them alone at first. Jack's Dad will have his say later, no doubt, about them being there together, and I'm sure about the living arrangements.

Ennis is still Ennis. Sure of his decision when it's only the two of them, unsure when others are around. Ever the rancher, seeing in a few minutes of looking what needs to be done and the hard work ahead.

Looking forward to reading the rest of your story. Lots of ground to cover still. Thanks.

Re: Won't be losing him... phare_bzh March 5 2007, 08:23:52 UTC

This story is only at the beginning, I'm very glad for your comment and appreciate the analysis you've made.
The presence of varuious people around will be a problem for the boys? That's the amusement in writing this story!

beste regards, Alex

joetheone March 3 2007, 06:00:02 UTC

I'm happy they stopped and had a brief but well wonderful encounter together prior to arriving at Jacks parents home. Also I'm happy to see how she welcomed Ennis home as if this is his home and I hope he understood the meaning behind those words even though scarry words to hear. I'm sort of looking forward to how Jack's father handles Ennis but this should be interesting. Joe

phare_bzh March 5 2007, 08:25:15 UTC

Hallo Joe,
thanks for reading and commenting!
We'll see soon what happens with Dad Twist!
thanks again, Alex