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Apr 20, 2007 09:18

Title: Bluebells and roses ( Read more... )

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grlewis April 20 2007, 12:36:55 UTC
beautiful, bittersweet chapter. ennis and his hunting, jack having to try it against his own better judgement; having to pour baths, fix meals, turn down the bed, set the candles. then to have the feeling of making love but still having to return to the servant's role as ennis would never think to share chores. no equality here. very, very bittersweet.

thanks for putting a note up on bbm slash when you add a new chapter. i dont frequent fanfic.net very often and without your note on bbm slash would have missed the new chapter completely. i enjoy this work of yours and wouldn't want to miss any of it. thanks

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phare_bzh April 20 2007, 16:44:29 UTC
thanks dear friend,
I know yoiu read it also on ff.net, whwrem I find easiet and faster to post, but be sure that I always add a link on bbm slash because I find it the real proper place for this fictions.
The setting of this chapter was the first thing I had in mind when I started this story, in fact the prologue (or appetizer) was set in the cabin.
Yes, it is bittersweet, but life is always so, I think

best regards and a nice WE
Phare-Alex

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carol1943 April 20 2007, 14:24:41 UTC
Wonderful chapter, Alex.

Carol

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phare_bzh April 20 2007, 16:41:19 UTC
you know how I appreciate your words and your help, you're still one of my Beta!
This story at first was strange, but now I feel people understand its spirit.
Hugs

Alex

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anonymous April 20 2007, 16:23:33 UTC
The plot is getting better and better. I enjoy it. Thanks.

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phare_bzh April 20 2007, 16:41:46 UTC
Thanks for your opinion, I'm glad you liked it!

Alex

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In a cabin in the woods two young men made love joetheone April 22 2007, 14:36:46 UTC
Yes I love this story and I love how Ennis and Jack came together and the passion and the fury of taking Jack as his own but also realizing that Jack is more then a servant but a friend a compainion and a person he trust. Joe

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Re: In a cabin in the woods two young men made love phare_bzh April 23 2007, 16:02:46 UTC
thanks as always Joe for appreciating this work.
Yes I needed to re-create my own FNIT that now is a FNIC (in the cabin;-) but the prpblem was how to make them do thelast step?
I had to thanks a lot my Beta Sam for her help in the developing of this scene

Best regards
Ph

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