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[phare_bzh]

Title: Bluebells and roses

Comments

[anonymous]

I continue to really enjoy the setting of your story. Aguirre is simply horrid.

[phare_bzh]

Thanks for followint the story, and sorry for my delay in replying, but RL was a little hard last month (and I imagine next, too)
Thanks Alex

[anonymous]

Hey, I still read this story.
This story laid particular stress on narrative and dialogue. I like those parts, and maybe you can flesh out the composition with adding more characters' inner feelings, emotions.

[phare_bzh]

Thanks for yours suggestions, I'll discuss also with my beta. Sorry for the replay that took solong, but I was a little busy (!!!) last weeks.
Regards Alex