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Bones Ficlet: The Wonder

Feb 14, 2009 00:31

Title: The Wonder
Author: pharmduh
Characters: Booth/Brennan
Rating: K
Spoilers: Nothing specific, maybe "Aliens in a Spaceship"
Summary: She's never had much use for poetry.

( here is the deepest secret nobody knows )

bones fic, fic, bones

Comments 13

accordingtomel February 14 2009, 16:58:14 UTC

Um yeah....you rock!! This was great! I really love your little ficlets :D.

I especially loved the last couple lines: It might have not been love, not really; she would not presume to know either way. But it was real. And that was all that mattered to her.

So fitting. So honest. So true to Brennan's character.

Great job! :D

le_red_queen February 15 2009, 14:59:30 UTC

What a beautiful, simple little Valentine's Day ficlet :D

pharmduh February 25 2009, 01:01:50 UTC

Thank you, for reading and for the feedback. :o)

pharmduh February 25 2009, 01:00:15 UTC

Haha, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this and thought it was in character. Really appreciate the feedback, thanks! :o)

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pharmduh February 25 2009, 01:06:30 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad it seemed "very Brennan". Just got into reading poetry (here at exceptindreams.livejournal.com) and that one really stuck with me, it's lyrical and beautiful and expressive all at the same time.

Thank you for reading! :o)

tempertemper February 14 2009, 17:54:19 UTC

Sometimes she felt dizzy enough to lean against him as they stood by the window. He would of course catch her.

Sometimes he made her so dizzy that she couldn’t bring herself to stop.

That is astounding - I adore that but I adore all of it.

Happy Valentine's Day to you too :)

pharmduh February 25 2009, 01:11:20 UTC

Aww, thank you so much! My Valentine's Day was spent gorging myself on chocolate haha (seriously, I don't know where it all went) but in a good way because it made me happy, much like your feedback.

Happy Belated Birthday! I hope you had a great one. :o)

pink_flame_87 February 14 2009, 17:58:41 UTC

I love this. Thank you for making Valentine's Day more romantic than my actual day has any hope of being. You had me when she leaned her head on his shoulder. All of it was IC and lovely.

pharmduh February 25 2009, 01:14:11 UTC

Thank you for making staying up and not studying to write this ficlet worthwhile. :o)

I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the feedback and for reading.

buffyangellvr23 February 14 2009, 18:57:21 UTC

aww nice :)

pharmduh February 25 2009, 01:15:29 UTC

Thank you! :o)