Only sadness remains, and it will pass (2/2)

Jan 04, 2012 21:11


Title: Only sadness remains, and it will pass (2/2)
Fandom: Glee
Pairing: Quinn/Puck
Rating: PG-13 for language and sensitive themes
Summary: They get married in May, under an awning of budding trees, and she wears a simple white gown that fits tight over the little belly that’s starting to show.
A/N: A VERY belated Christmas present for the lovely ( Read more... )

fanfiction, glee, quinn/puck

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tinylegacies January 5 2012, 02:50:01 UTC
This is heartbreakingly lovely, Bekah.

*sniffles*

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phelipa January 5 2012, 03:12:22 UTC
*hugs*
Thank you, Jen!!

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kait_18 January 5 2012, 04:24:23 UTC
Oh my goodness, Bekah!!!!!!

I just, guh, I don't even know what to say. This is so incredibly gorgeous and moving and heartbreaking and perfect.

I loved every minute of it, and loved all the parallels you had going here. From them keeping the pregnancy a secret at the wedding to them moving into this obviously much bigger secret regarding the pregnancy later on. I thought it was really interesting that you had Quinn carry the baby without finding out anything else...it was such a leap of faith for her (and Puck) and I think a very Quinn thing for her to do.

My heart broke for them, thinking that they were going to get to keep this baby and then moving through the realization that they'd be saying goodbye to her, too, and figuring out how to love her anyway. It felt a lot like the way Quinn ultimately decided to love Beth, even if the situation was different.

Can I just take Evelyn home with me? She sounds like such a little nugget to love on. I'm glad you left her life open ended, because maybe just maybe she'd defy the odds ( ... )

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phelipa January 5 2012, 04:56:10 UTC
*hugs*
I'm glad you like it, my dear.
Also, sorry about the formatting, LJ is being a complete bitch about it...I don't know why the text is different sizes.
It was something we talked about, finding out about the potential of an illness and deciding to go through with the pregnancy without further testing, at work and I thought it was a very interesting idea. Especially given her religious background.
I love little Evelyn. I was trying to write the next scene/a little follow up about a year later but I just couldn't...it was better for me to leave it open too ;)
♥ I had to throw that little part in after you converted me, I do love them now!
Also....holy epic comment, Batman ;) I'm so happy you liked it!

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phelipa January 5 2012, 05:01:12 UTC
Also...what on earth am I supposed to write now? I've lost my christmas inspiration and now my two big fics are done...I feel lost :(

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kait_18 January 5 2012, 05:03:59 UTC
Awww :-( write more baby fic! Finchel! ;-)

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only_because3 January 5 2012, 06:57:15 UTC
Oh gosh, I would've kicked your butt if this had ended really sad because I'm reading this before bed. Oh goodness, my heart ached for them. But somehow, I never lost hope for them. This was absolutely beautiful :)

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phelipa January 31 2012, 00:45:00 UTC
:) I haven't heard from you in ages! (mind you I haven't written in ages hehehe)
Thank you for the lovely comment :)

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pee_wee_2005 January 9 2012, 18:12:28 UTC
I know a couple who are going through a Trismoy 18. Jesus, what an awful situation.

Hurt my heart, but this was wonderful.

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phelipa January 31 2012, 00:44:22 UTC
:( That's just awful, I'm so sorry for them. *hugs*

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