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Good For What Ails You 7/?
Sep 01, 2006 23:32
Title: Good For What Ails you (
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moffel83
September 2 2006, 22:44:28 UTC
Wow, I loved this! Dom's nervousness, Elijah "helping" with it(that was hot), the whole concert-great chapter! And I loved how emotional the end was with Lij singing Breaking the Habit. You do a great job with this:)
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phentalon
September 2 2006, 22:57:49 UTC
Thanks. i thoguht it was a tad rushed, wirhout enough feeling durifn the other songs, just kinda skipped over them. Glad you don't think so :)
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hobbit_eluned
September 30 2006, 03:33:28 UTC
Mmm the sence and emotion in those last few paragraphs with Lij singing are great.
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