takin a break from fma 107 incoherence

[pheonee]

TO POST THIS MONSTER.

It's actually a tiny little 50-sentence fic. But like. IT TOOK ME NINE MONTHS TO FINISH. The last 8 sentences I got to FOUGHT ME TOOTH AND NAIL. (First 35 prompts: a fortnight. Last 15: NINE MONTHS.)

Anyway. This is not officially endorsed by the 50setence comm, not even a little bit. I just saw nice prompts and wanted to

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[mintpearlvoice]

I was going to fill this comment space with a coherent explanation of what my favorite sentences were and why. But by the time I got to the end, I realized that every sentence was my favorite.
Therefore, you'll have to content yourself with some incoherent keymashing:

OHMYGAAWSH THIS IS AMAZING AND YOU'VE CAPTURED THE ESSENCE OF THEIR RELATIONSHIP AND IT'S SO FUNNY AND SHIPPY AND SQUEE-INDUCING AND AND AND AND AND ASDFGHJKL AND.
:D

[pheonee]

I envy your ability to be this coherent even when keysmashing! This is what I look like when I'm keysmashing. :|

But uh, thank you so so much ;_; I have succeeded in my goal! ♥