backlogged guilt

[phildonu37]

fangs gnaw
shredding callus
hearts loving what
cannot be with
morning-after clothes
and night-before regrets
spill over bedsheets
kick off dust from
useless wishes
useful wrappers
renew confidence that
the world is shit
and
love is a fairytale

Comments

[drownthomas]

it's so much easier to play pretend
to dress up
make puppets
to mimick and imitate and tease
to say what cannot be said and roll it around in the stomach
to let it boil
icy teeth and hellish eyes shine coal black and
to hear the words "don't go."
but the curtain falls
and we can all walk away from that

i liked this one of yours. this piece of shit i just thought of, so tell me what you think.

well, at least you're not emo

[phildonu37]

yeah, it is a piece of shit - but considering it's improv - it's pretty good. got some nice shit goin on in there. thanks for the compliment about my shit - i'm home on thursday for 3 weeks, if you're around for thanksgiving we should go catch a movie or somethin