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[philippa_]

Title: Colours of Pain caused by a Comic Book part 2.
Author: Philippa
Beta: erynnbeth
Disclaimer: I do not own anything

I have a beta for this chapter (erynnbeth) Thank you so much. You have been such a great help. It turns out I am really bad at deciding where commas go and I am amazed at your patience with going through and spotting them all

Comments

[malinr]

DID YOU KILL RYAN? This is a very good story. Love how you write Seth`s angst. Please post soon again. The suspense is killing me. Hugs

[philippa_]

:) You will have to wait and see.
Thank you for commenting. The next chapter will be as soon as possible but I'm doing exams at the moment.

[zbyszko]

Hee, you better not have killed Ryan or you will not be able to knit the woolyRyan. : )

Great job with the story so far.

[philippa_]

Oh no!! :( I'm loving the woolyRyan in your icon by the way :)

Thank you I'm glad you like it.

[zbyszko]

I knit that particular version of the woolyRyan in honor of all the hurt/comfort fics- even before Ryan landed in hospital twice in season 4. : )

[philippa_]

I love the details. Is he wearing his wrist cuff or is the black something else? It's quite hard to see.
I was so excited that they included hurt/comfort into season 4 not once but twice :)

[beachtree]

Very compelling emotions and captivating, riveting descriptions. It's amazing that a certain someone can be observent of so many details in such amazing clarity when he's terrified and riddled with guilt, isn't it? Who knew Seth could be so perceptive. I'm not much for Seth introspection, but it's our only way to have any insights into the context of the story and into Ryan's condition, so you make it both essential and engaging

[philippa_]

Thank you for your thoughts. Yes I have warped Seth slightly from the selfich little urchin we see on screen to a brothery Seth. Although going through an experience like this because of his selfish ways would probably change his view on things. At least that is the direction I'm aiming in.

I like cliff hangers, there is just something about them which make them really fun to write.

Well as I've mentioned in the past I do love the comfort but it will be a bumpy ride for our Ryan. Sandy and Kirsten will be in the next chapter and at the moment i am planning for Ryan's condition to be revealed then when they arrive. I'm happy that you are reading this and willing to give me all your thoughts.

[beachtree]

Urchin? Sea urchin in this watery set story?

Nothing in Ryan's life is easy- ever. Nothing ever comes without tremendous struggle, especially compared to everyone else. That's why he takes nothing for granted and has learned to be so determined and focused. This would be no different! I guess we'll have to see just how rough a road with how many peaks and valleys and twists and obstacles you map out. We'll also have to see just how invested the Cohens are and how aware of emotions, bonds, dynamics and feelings they are as of now and will be.

Thanks again!

[philippa_]

Haha I didn't make the connection about that till you pointed it out

[mystoryinstereo]

oh mah gawdz. that's so good. it's so addictive, you just want to read on. i love how you wrote seth being kinda clueless and flustered; that combination will never fail to amuse me. i hope you're going to write some more because this is some good writing :)

ps, we need to do something soon, otherwise i may die from overworking and lack of ice skating!

[philippa_]

Thanks Bex, I'm glad you are enjoying this.

Yes we must, however I think it will have to be after half term because i just have so much work to do :( I have three days left and four full subjects to do. Geography was more work that i had anticipated. But how does you, me, a sub and Hannah sound for next friday after school?

[mystoryinstereo]

aww it's really good. what is there not to enjoy :)

no, that's fair. i only just started biology today tbh and i totally get that. i've done all the history and physics though. fucked if i'll do maths and chemistry in time though haha.

that sounds incredibly like a plan, my lovely :)

i hate lj coding :(

[mystoryinstereo]

does this gorgeous boy look familiar though!

[cheekymice]

Ack!

Just got round to this baby.

I do believe you are evil. Yup...evil. ;)

[philippa_]

:) haha I'm taking a leaf out of your book with the cliff hanger endings. It's really fun so I can see why you do it so often.

I'm glad that you are liking it.