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[philippa_]

Title: The Colours of Pain caused by a Comic Book chapter 3
Rating: Hmm probably PG-13
Summary: Well, I felt like writing some hurt/comfort and it involves Ryan, Seth, the rover and a cliff
Word Count: 2874
Disclaimer: I do not own anything
Authors Note: This is for Beachtree because she asked me if I had given up on this story and I

Comments

[sheelock]

Just located this story - I'm so scared for Ryan right now - hopw you update soon with good news.

[philippa_]

I'm glad that you are reading this and wanting to read more. I will try and write more soon. Thanks for reading and commenting.

[mystoryinstereo]

omg that was so good. damn bb, i can't wait for more :) it's so sad but i loved the doctors name. jeez, i can never make up names but that's a cracker haha.

i'm so bad with reviews, just know that i loved it haha. if you want me to beta anything btw just ask :)

[philippa_]

Thanks Bex.

Haha I'm not really sure where that name came from. It's probably someone I know from somewhere but the name stuck in my head when I was writing this so I used it.

Cool, I will definately need you to read the story that I told you about before. Thanks for offering :)

[mystoryinstereo]

haha it's alright. yeah, when you get your intranetz~* back just send it over and i'll read it over. :)

ps, we need to arrange with the stuff. so how shall i get hold of you once you've moved? mobile?

[philippa_]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I was pondering whether to send it to you but I didn't want to seem rude by forcing it on you after all this time. Would you be willing to beta the next chapter? I always feel a lot better about posting when someone has read through it and you did such a good job on the last chapter. Did I leave out as many commas again this time?

I didn't want to leave everyone in suspense about Ryan's condition just yet. There is plenty of time for that later mwahaha.

I'm glad you liked that line. I almost deleted that actually because I wasn't sure if I'd written it right. I wrote many different versions of it and then decided on that one but I was about to give up on it so I'm pleased that you mentioned it.

Yay you also picked up on the colour thing. I'm also doing this for my fan fic 100 table for the colours. This one was for red so thats the blood Ryan's receiving. I'm so glad you spotted it :)

[60schic]

“Oh Ryan, oh God kid.” he whispered.---yep, you definitely nailed Sandy right here.

I found I remembered this story without having to reread and I'm happy you updated. Now, just how mean are you going to be to Ryan, hmmm?

Nicely done.

[philippa_]

Thank you for reading and commenting.
I'm so glad that you like this and that you remembered it.

hehe oh, I won't be too mean to him *bats eyelids*

[fredsmith518]

You protray the parental worry very well.
Well paced, Phiippa.

lucky there is such a pretty nurse there to be so caring and helpful, lovely description A young nurse came over to them. Her long auburn hair lay tied back in a pony tail traveling down her back. Her large blue eyes stood out on her slightly tanned and freckled face.

[philippa_]

Thanks Fred,

Haha yes I may have written a prettier version of me in there but you know there is a serious lack of auburn haired people in fan fiction. Lindsay and her mum are the closest things to auburn in the OC so I thought it was time for another person.

Thanks for the feedback :)

[fredsmith518]

prettier? that would be hugely difficult!
it is a lovely, clear description sketched in a few words, (and fits you to a tee)