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Oct 07, 2007 11:20

Title: Alone again
Author: philippa_
Rating: hmm PG maybe
Word Count: 1,156 words
Summary: Ryan's thoughts as he is left alone in the pool house for the first time. I was feeling a little sad at the thought of the OC never returning for another season so I decided to write a little one shot from Ryan's first night in Newport.

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alone again, fanfic 100

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nightrider101 October 7 2007, 14:32:55 UTC
It's always nice to see stories and snippets from early season 1. I thought you did a wonderful job portraying Ryan's thoughts on his first night in Newport. You closed the story with a hint of promise and hope which I liked.

Tomorrow would be a new day.

Great writing! Thanks for sharing with us.

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philippa_ October 7 2007, 14:50:11 UTC
Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

I'm so glad you liked it.

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fredsmith518 October 7 2007, 16:48:50 UTC
the size of the main house made it look like there should have been plenty of bed rooms so what was the need of another one outside kinda like a reverse Tardis!

I liked the idea of Ryan wanting to experience that beach, nice canon link there too. I love that scene when the 3 guys walk up the path after the sailing.

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philippa_ October 7 2007, 17:04:01 UTC
Thanks for reading Fred :)

I love that scene too.

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katwoman76 October 7 2007, 23:45:27 UTC
Great look into Ryan's thoughts. Very believable version of that night for him.
Thanks for sharing.

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philippa_ October 8 2007, 19:03:41 UTC
Thank you :)

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beachtree October 8 2007, 03:11:54 UTC
Thanks for this. There can never be too much, or even enough, when it comes to those earliest moments and days. Not only does focusing on this time provide context and framework, but it reminds us and stresses just how much Ryan was bombarded with and trying to process with so much upheaval. He literally was ripped from one world- or cast out, and deposited in another- although with no certainty of what would come next or where he would land ( ... )

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philippa_ October 8 2007, 19:38:16 UTC
Thanks Beachtree for such a nice long comment. I really appreciate you taking the time to let me know how you felt about it and your thoughts on the matter :)

Sorry this won't be very long at all but I have a ridicolously short time to do this in.

What does TPTB stand for? I've seen it written before but have never been sure what it means.

and making it so real.

I'm glad you thought it felt real. That is something I really wanted to acheive.

I do love "old school Ryan" and am so pleased that people have liked this.

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beachtree October 8 2007, 21:45:57 UTC
You're welcome and I'm rushing too.

TPTB means "the powers that be," as in the producers, writers, show runner, and even studio execs if they determined policy or made creative decisions. Does that help?

Love the early days/old school. There have to be millions of gaps in those first weeks alone starting with the first night.

I hope you continue to fill some!

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philippa_ October 9 2007, 16:55:25 UTC
Oh okay, thank you. I've seen it written so many times and have never understood what it meant. SO it's basically the people behind the show.

There have to be millions of gaps in those first weeks alone

I know, there is so much that I would have loved to see. For me, most of the scenes ended in those early days way too soon.

:) Well, I certainly enjoy writing them so we shall see.

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philippa_ October 8 2007, 19:40:30 UTC
Thanks Ryan haha sorry. I mean thanks Monnie. You will not believe how many times I do that *snorts*

I'm glad you liked it :)

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