The Colours of Pain caused by a Comic Book

[philippa_]

Title: The Colours of Pain caused by a Comic book (6/10)
Rating: PG-13
Word Count:1,975
Beta:Erynnbeth Thank you so much for your help and patience :)
Summary: Well, I felt like writing some hurt/comfort and it involves Ryan, Seth, worried Sandy and Kirsten, the rover and a cliff!
Author's Note: Thanks also to beachtree who gave me some very useful medical

Comments

[muchtvs]

Your head injury stuff seems dead on to me. I like that he isn't miraculously healed.

Cohens plus one...I shall never get sick of. So heartbreaking...Ryan wanting Dawn...but totally understandable. I hope Kirsten doesn't take it too personally. And Sandy...sniff.

And Seth...I like how you are showing his emotions...scared....guilt...and still hurt himself.

Nice job. This is your first story...right? I hope you realize you are doing a great job.

[philippa_]

Phew... the only medical knowlege I have is what I see on ER! :) Luckily beachtree sent me some information.

Thanks for the kind comment. I'm really glad you like it.

[60schic]

Ouch! I also find your medical 'stuff' quite credible. One thing I know is that short term memory loss is very common in head injuries, so Ryan not remembering the crash would be expected.

Nice update. You've captured the Cohens' feelings well.

[philippa_]

Thanks :)

Luckily I have beachtree who is willing to send me information about head injuries.

I'm glad you liked it.

[chazper]

Others have already said it, so I'll just join the chorus: I love your Cohens+1 interaction, especially guilt-ridden Seth--and confused, hurting Ryan, of course!

[philippa_]

Thanks chazper :)

I'm glad you like it.

[ansy_pansy]

aww some really great scenes,
it's all taut and perfect