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[philippa_]

Hi,

Okay, I'm going to try this here.

A couple of months ago, I mentioned a rather violent fic that I wasn't sure what to rate. Well, I've been posting it on fanfic.net but the people are reading but not sharing their thoughts. So, I was wondering what you guys thought of it.

*takes a deep breath*

Title: The Power of Speech
Rating: M for

Comments

[katwoman76]

Yay! You finally posted it here.
Just read the latest chapter on ff.net.
I admit, I rarely comment on stories there.
Plus, you don't have to be as concerned about ratings here as there.
What about the other stories you only posted on ff.net so far?
Will they make their way over here?

And I for one totally like it. Woobie Ryan at it's best with Frank being a real asshole.
Without talking too much in detail about the chapters I read already on ff.net (I don't want to spoil anyone) - I wonder when and how the Cohens will get involved. Because they will, right? Soon? *hopeful eyes*

[philippa_]

The Cohen's will arrive soon, I promise. I'm just giving Ryan a very angst, pre Cohen, start to the story.

I'm not sure if I will post them over here. I may post a couple of one shots but am not totally sure yet. Thanks for the encouragement though :)

[muchtvs]

Hey, hardly anyone ever comments on my stuff over at fanfic anymore either. I think most everyone has moved over here. I wouldn't fret over that.

Yeah, the story is violent, but not more so than many of the stories that have appeared here and there on the flist. Hell, look what I put the boy through.

Anyway, interesting AU with Frank still in the house. I think Frank killed Dawn...and I think Ryan isn't far behind. Excrutiating details to read.

[katwoman76]

You would actually need to POST there (or anywhere for that matter) to get comments, sweetie. *nudges with the pointy stick*
But yeah, I am guilty of not commeting on ff.net much either.
Here I usually try to give at least a shot comment, when I read a story - there only once in a while.

[philippa_]

Seriously? But all your stories are amazing!

Chapter 2 is the most but actually its so over the top that people may laugh. :)

I'm glad you liked.

[jassylou]

This is great Phlippa. You really are evil to our poor yickle woobie. Going to search on FF now.I'd better be quick as I imagine Ryan might be dead before I get there.

You "Mean-Meanie"!!! LOL

[katwoman76]

You should check out all the stories, phil has posted over there.
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1064312/Phil929
They are all worth the read IMHO.

[jassylou]

Thanks Kat:) I've been having trouble trying to get Chapter to scroll up.
I don't know why I always have touble with the FF site.
I'll definitely read the fics you've suggested tonight.

Cheers doll:D

[jassylou]

PS:that should be chapter 2 I'm having trouble reading.

Crap!! It's soo frustrating

[malinr]

A great begining. If I could write I would only post here. You really have a way with words. More please. Hugs

[philippa_]

Aww thank you :)

Well, I have quite a few chapters ready to post.

[chazper]

Did you think we'd be put off by the violence in this story? I'm certainly not. I have no problem with violence if it's written well and in character, which this certainly is. So come out from the hole! Even though it's painfully grim, this is a gripping story. I hope the TBC happens soon; I admit that I'm very anxious to learn how and when Ryan meets the Cohens. He clearly needs them now!

[philippa_]

Chapter 2 is umm well... is a tad ott violent, comically so at the end.

I'm really glad you like this. I came out of my hole today and was very pleased to see that people are enjoying.

I have another five chapters ready to post so I'll put the next chapter up very soon.