The Power of Speech

[philippa_]

Hi,

Yay! I came out my hole and had comments :D

Thank you for all of your kind comments. I thought I'd post the links to the chapters which I have already posted on fanfic.net, if anyone's interested and then I can post the new chapters on here.

Okay so...

Chapter 1 (as the chapter I posted yesterday was the prologue!) is here This one is

Comments

[brassebouillon]

You're not creepy, it's really well-written and I'm amazed because you're 18 and really talented (too much, IMO, 18 years old aren't supposed to be that good!!).
I've read all your fanfics on FFnet thanks to Katwoman76's link and between 'Everythinkg will be alright' which was already really good and this one, the progress you've made are incredible. Your writing is so much intense and mature, it's impressive!
Congrats (and please, update soon!!)

[philippa_]

Phew I'm glad you're not too creeped out about it. Aww thank you. I'm 16 actually :D

Oh my lord, I wrote Everything will be alright when I was about 14. Very embarrasing. I remember being so excited because Cheeky commented and then Beachtree did.

Thanks :)

[katwoman76]

You improved your writing since that time, but I already liked that story a lot. Read it several times. It amazes me, that you were able to write it at the age of 14.

[ocmiss]

I commented on ff.net earlier, but I still wanted to tell you that it's a really great fic.
And I just understood a few days before, that you were Phil929 lol. You should post the thing about the comic book accident, this one's really great too.
Thanks !

[philippa_]

Thanks :)

I think with the username Phil929, people think I'm a boy :D

I've been thinking about doing that actually but haven't got around to doing it yet.

I'm glad you enjoyed.

[philippa_]

Thanks Themus, you didn't think the end of chapter 2 was too odd? I'm really glad that you liked them. Ooh I love your angsty Ryan fics, great minds think alike :)

I've never actually considered flocking fics, which is odd because it would probably be a good thing to do with fics I feel uncomfortable about. Thanks :)

[caligirl59]

Ok,enough Ryan suffering,my heart is hurting,time to bring in the big guns called the Cohens.....pretty please.

[philippa_]

:) Don't worry. They're coming soon.

[mel39]

Chapter 1 - Liked the idea of bringing in Theresa on the edge f this story, dumping Ryan n his absence for Eddie, though I'm hoping she'll notice the poor boy isn't around. Nice reflections of Ryan and Trey time too.

[philippa_]

Thanks Mel. Theresa's a little slutty here. If Ryan isn't keeping her happy, Eddy will take over. Thanks for the comment :D