The Power of Speech

[philippa_]

Hi, A little dark easter present for you all :D

Title: The Power of Speech chapter 4
Rating: I'm going to put it down from an M to a T for this chapter.
Summary: An AU where Ryan's father wasn't arrested and continued to beat Dawn and the boys. Ryan meets the Cohens through a different way.
Author's note: Okay, the Cohens aren't in just yet but

Comments

[fifimom]

Thanks for the update. I look forward to reading more.

[philippa_]

Thanks fifimom :)

[smc36]

Oh. Wow. "Ryan looked into his eyes and he noticed for the first time that his brother had their father’s eyes. He hadn’t noticed it before."

That's...scary. Poor Ryan. Poor silent Ryan.

[philippa_]

Thanks :)

Just to let you know, I came across some of your stories the other day and they are really good.

[smc36]

Just to let you know, I came across some of your stories the other day and they are really good

Thanks.
Yeah, I'm really bad at remembering to cross post to oc_fic. I'm figuring on finishing this series/collection/pile of sappy stuff and then posting it all at one shot.
Oh, and I don't post at fanfic any longer

[anne35]

I was like Themus. I fully expected this chapter to end with a police chase and a wrecked stolen car. Very nice to see that you like to keep us all guessing.

It will be very interesting to see just how you do manage to introduce the Cohens.

[philippa_]

I was thinking of doing that but then thought that was a little too predictable and that's not how I wanted Ryan to meet Sandy.

Sandy's coming in the next chapter.

Thanks :)

[caligirl59]

This is unpredictable and really really sad...I hope Ryan gets to meet the Cohens pretty soon!Loving it.

[philippa_]

Thanks :)

Sandy is in the next chapter so not too long now. I'm really glad your liking it.

[mel39]

Powerful chapter here, how Ryan is reminded of his father through Trey. I liked how Ryan hadn't realised he was mute himself, that it took Trey to point it out. Also liked little Molly, an interesting addition.