The Colours of Pain caused by a Comic Book

Jul 20, 2008 17:49

As I was sitting in the plane trying to take a nap, I remembered I hadn't posted this yet.

Title: The Colours of Pain caused by a Comic Book (7/10)
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1,574
Beta: erynnbeth Thank you so much for your help and patience :)
Summary: Well, I felt like writing some hurt/comfort and it involves Ryan, Seth, worried Sandy and Kirsten, the ( Read more... )

fanfic 100, colours of pain

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beachtree July 21 2008, 09:00:22 UTC
I was thinking about this story recently, although I'm not sure what prompted that. Regardless, I'm glad you were too- obviously ( ... )

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philippa_ July 21 2008, 10:33:48 UTC
I know, I forgot to say at the beginning that I was moving it on a bit which I'd been planning to do. I'm glad I didn't leave you feeling too cheated :)

Thanks Beach. I hope I can convey all the things you mentioned. It's going to be hard to write the next chapter without straying too close to other stories that have been written.

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beachtree July 21 2008, 10:47:35 UTC
Well, you're changing the environment from hospital to house, but that doesn't mean that the issues don't/won't/can't linger and even worsen. There can always be steps forward followed by steps back, so you may end up at the hospital again anyway! Someone who wasn't breathing, swallowed that much water, and suffered that kind of head trauma in addition to how his whole body was battered about is going to have issues, so... no fun for Ryan.

Each story has a unique premise, a different author bringing a unique perspective and stamp to it, and no two can be the same. Besides, what's not to love about h/c and all it explores?

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fifimom July 21 2008, 09:43:39 UTC
Poor Ryan but also poor Kirsten and Sandy. It's so hard to see your child really hurt physically, emotionally, mentally. Parents want to be able to just kiss it and make it better. Thanks for the update. Nicely done.

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philippa_ July 21 2008, 10:34:54 UTC
Thanks :)

I'm glad you're enjoying. Sorry it's taken me so long to write a new chapter.

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smc36 July 21 2008, 13:59:10 UTC
Cohen family love!!! Injured Ryan!
My kind of morning.

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philippa_ July 22 2008, 07:46:38 UTC
Thanks :)

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fruitya July 21 2008, 19:50:58 UTC
Oh hooray. I was hoping to see some updates on all your great stories as your schedule lightened up. This chapter does not disappoint. Thanks!

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philippa_ July 22 2008, 07:47:31 UTC
*blushes*

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

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60schic July 22 2008, 04:50:53 UTC
I was delighted to see that you had updated this.

Kirsten tried to believe that there was nothing to worry about, but she still couldn’t quell the feeling that something wasn’t quite right. - this, combined with the excruciating amount of pain he seems to be in, has me very concerned. And since this is pure hurt/comfort, I guess I should expect that.

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philippa_ July 22 2008, 07:48:13 UTC
And since this is pure hurt/comfort, I guess I should expect that.

hehe yeah...

Thanks :)

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