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Forever & Ever 43

Aug 12, 2012 15:34

Title: Forever & Ever (Miseinen Sequel)
Author: Zion Shadowlet
Beta: butterflysaga(the bitch)
Characters: Aoi, Uruha, Ruki, Reita, Kai and many OCs (Fuwa etc.)
Pairing: Aoi/Uruha and more~
Genre: Drama, Romance, Friendship, Comedy
Rating: NC17
Summary: Six years have passed since the summer at the Dazai Bright Future Retreat for Troubled Children. The boys meet in an ( Read more... )

forever & ever, sequel, oc/ruki, reita/ruki, aoi/uruha

Comments 11

knobay August 13 2012, 18:44:34 UTC

Sorry for not replying in the last couple of chaps been busy lately.

The whole Ruki and Fuwa thing just isn't clicking in my mind. I don't think it's the age thing. I just feel like. I don't know. It just doesn't feel like a dating relationship to me. AOIHA!!! IS BACK. But I like the chap.

kayacape August 13 2012, 22:57:33 UTC

I strangely like Fuwa/Ruki but I LOVE Reituki. I just trust (and know) that whatever happens in this story will be good.

Aoi called Uruha "ducky baby" again! My life is complete!

First, Fuwa and Ruki's conversation was FUCKING HILLARIOUS. So was Fuwa and Reita trading cute Ruki facts. PURE COMEDY GOLD BABE~

But then...you had to go and break our hearts at the end.

veroxion August 16 2012, 09:17:27 UTC

The start made me feel really sad. D and Kai seem so happy together, and the way Kai is thinking is pretty much how I am as well. Can't they just keep in touch? It's easier said than done, I know... but if they really wanted to keep what they have, then they would, wouldn't they? Otherwise it seems what they have together is just so irrevelent that they can just let it go and move on. And that makes me feel rather depressed, just the thought of that when you find happiness, you just "let it go" when things don't seem to work out. I thought Kai would at least try and fight for what he wants. I mean, I understand the mechanics as well, that they're both family-oriented and that's the reason why Kai knows D has to leave. But really, I want Kai to be selfish for once and at least try and keep this for himself. :( I really, really like this pairing. I'm usually at ends with character/OC pairings because on the occasion, they are so badly done and not tastetful at all. They seem fake to me mainly, because the OC isn't defined as a character ( ... )

veroxion August 16 2012, 09:17:56 UTC

My comment was so long, I had to split it LOL. Here's the rest ( ... )

in_bloom81 August 21 2012, 14:01:33 UTC

While Reita and Fuwa were going 'oh so cuuuute!' about Ruki, they were the ones I found adorable xD

And don't feel sorry for Reita as most others do. Since Reita rejected Ruki before this more than once really , I'm not the kind of person who thinks he has a right to feel sad now. And I don't think Reita is sad or lonely at all which is what makes him great as a person. He was hurt cause Ruki accused him of something as selfish as stealing him back. He had already made it clear to Ruki that he wanted them to be back as being friends and that he wishes for the best for his pal.
For various reasons I'm worried about Fuwa though. He isn't the same Fuwa we knew ...he seems very fragile now and I'm worried Ruki might do something to hurt him. At first I thought it's because you're writing more about Fuwa that we get to see a different side of him where he is so adorable <3 but a part of me wonders is he just became sort of childlike after Isao's death? It's like he became very weak and broken and completely resigned himself to Ruki which ( ... )

phillipthefrog August 22 2012, 14:02:30 UTC

Hmm you know I did realize that the way Fuwa is depicted in this fic is different than in Miseinen but I only realized that very recently when I was working on the latest chapter. And to be honest, I think it's because as the writer-or at least the sort of writer I am, I don't really perceive characters changing as much? I don't know how to explain it.... Maybe it's just that they become more and more human to me, almost like you are in a dark room with a flashlight as the writer/reader and you go about discovering the objects and the shape of the room that makes up a person. I think though that yes, he is more fragile after the loss of Isao but you bring up an interesting point about if the others will still look up to him and to be honest, I think a lot of the readers have stopped looking up to him and that kinda disappoints me because that's how people tend to view those types, almost as if they are inhuman, like Mother Teresa or Martin Luther King jr. or what have you, as being this sort of flat boarded character that is merely ( ... )