Akamizu - 赤水 - Chapter 7 "Tokyo" - Final

Jan 26, 2013 22:39

Title: Akamizu - 赤水
Author: Zion Shadowlet
Beta: butterflysaga
Characters: Uruha, Aoi, OCs
Pairing: Aoi/Uruha
Genre: Horror, Romance, Supernatural
Rating: NC17
Summary: After the sudden disappearance of his fiancé Usagi, Kouyou travels to a remote town to find her in a place known ominously as “Akamizu” where she is in the powerful grip of a strange man who has taken ( Read more... )

akamizu, aoi/uruha

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phillipthefrog January 27 2013, 19:39:28 UTC
Actually I originally planned to just write a one-shot. XD

Writing Aoi as a vampire was a tricky thing for me. I wanted to be able to make him still Aoi-like. I think he's naturally a sensitive and sweet person.

Thanks for commenting!

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xadowangel January 27 2013, 06:01:22 UTC
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This is just not enough!!!! I want more!!!!!

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phillipthefrog January 27 2013, 19:44:34 UTC
^^;

Err... Well, I'm currently working on a long multi-chapter.... so, if there'll be a sequel it wouldn't be until a while from now... :/

But I'm happy you liked it!

Thanks for commenting.

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candicecandy January 27 2013, 07:58:44 UTC
Wow...... I really have no words... It's just so powerful!
The things they do, it seems so... yet at the same time, it's all about survival, and wouldn't we all do the same? I guess there really is no right and wrong~
Nevertheless, I can tell how much Uruha loves Aoi!!! It's amazing and touching in so many ways...

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phillipthefrog January 27 2013, 19:45:25 UTC
Oh thank you :)

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yaawe January 27 2013, 09:14:13 UTC
I'm happy it ended this way bacause I was worried that story will end like Aoi said:“You know, Uruha, one day, I’m going to kill you.”
He wanted to kill him and in the end, Uru was the one saved him :)
It's good for Aoi that Uruha made him to leave Akamizu... if he stayed there, he probably wouldn't be able to move on :)
and what are they doing now... it's not totally right, but still better than killing innocent girls :o

I really enjoyed the whole story (even if it was a bit creepy sometimes :D ) and I'm looking forward your next fic :)

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phillipthefrog January 27 2013, 19:47:57 UTC
I wanted it to be creepy! XD And romantic too of course. :)

Thank you for all your comments! I hope you enjoy my next work.

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srsbusinessman January 27 2013, 14:42:31 UTC
ahhhhhhhhhh tbh i was a bit disappointed with the ending.. ahaha but i guess that's just me, wanting more drama lolol but yea good job with the fic! ^.^ overall, i really enjoyed the story! but yeah the ending still seems, idk umm.. abrupt? it feels like you can still develop this into something more epic, haha xD cant wait for more updates from you :) btw i wonder, do you have twitter?

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phillipthefrog January 27 2013, 19:53:05 UTC
I mulled a lot over the ending. I considered writing it much longer after they got to the city but I think I was personally ready to end it. Maybe I'll add more it later, like a sequel. Not sure though. I feel like I'm always promising sequels or threequels or whatever those are called XD

Yes, I do have a twitter!
tis' the link: https://twitter.com/AlexisBellinger

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