Fandom Young Avengers, No Warnings Needed, Not Betaed, Characters Belong To Marvel
Word count: 3033
Summary: This is how the Founders roll.
Author's Notes: I wanted more team fic; I miss Nate -> this came about from me thinking about how the team was organized before Kate became the YA sugar-momma. Criticism welcomed.
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TEAM Meeting )
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You also have a few grammar tweaks that throw the reader out. It should be 'borrow' not 'barrow'.
Apart from all that though, you do have good ideas. Of course they'd have team meetings at Eli's place of work! *chuckles* I wanted more of Nate's intentions though, I mean, he's come back into the past, right? What does he think when he sees his teammates? You could have more along those lines.
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Thanks for that, I shall fix it.
Nate may be the leader of the team, but Eli soo~oo running the day-to-day operations with Billy as his research assistant. That's an interesting idea, and I could see easing myself into 1st P.O.V. with that kind of story. But I have no idea what kind of story to do with him. I love the guy, but we know less about him than Tommy!
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Also, grammar+spelling :3
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I'm glad you found it interesting! Thank you for reading.
Does the ":3" mean I got better or worse?
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XD But that's okay. Just be more careful, or have someone check it over next time.
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A good beta-reader is so hard to find.
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However, I'd suggest getting a beta, just because while the grammar and spelling mistakes aren't completely awful, they can throw a reader off.
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Do you know if there is a community or someplace where I can get a beta?
Also, I <3 your icon!
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If you can't find anyone to do it, I'd be willing to beta for you, if you want.
And thanks for the compliment on my icon. :D
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If you are willing, I will be eternally grateful! \o/
What format should I send it to you, if you're willing?
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