Title: The Secret Sits
Author: The Philosopher Fool
Rating: R
Pairings: Lily/James, Remus/Sirius, Remus/Sirius/James
Summary: She would shrug off his questions and smile a smile that was so careless that it would break his heart every time he saw it. “Can’t sleep. Moon’s getting too bright.” That seemed to explain everything, while explaining
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I also loved your Lily. And the details of their relationship. It has such a realistic feel to it. And The moon being too bright is such a great image.
I noticed your comment about beinf BETAless.. if you need one, I've been one of several occasions, and am also willing.
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Love the feel of that passage, the desperation. Excellent. There are a few sentences that need work re grammar etc, but overall, this has a great flow to it. Lots of angst and great characterization.
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