Comments | philthecow: Untitled (First Date)

philthecow

Untitled (First Date)

Jul 23, 2005 19:40

This is a poem about one year ago today.

( Untitled (First Date) )

Comments 5

alliem42 July 23 2005, 23:52:05 UTC

squee!!!!!!!!!
that was adorable.

_swallow July 23 2005, 23:53:51 UTC

(Does the boldface have editorial significance, or is it just part of the text's formatting?)

meddles July 24 2005, 00:54:20 UTC

*snifflesniffleboohoo* I love you, Lauren! And Priyanko! And all the memories of you holding onto me or putting me to bed or in the cave... <3

pourquoi_pas July 24 2005, 21:23:13 UTC

and you offer me an altoid
and we smile at each other
(our smiles are curiously strong)

Great lines, Lauren! This made me smile :) (look, I just smiled in internet-speak). I could totally see you reading this at a poetry slam. Very cool.

vaginathecow September 1 2005, 07:09:55 UTC

OH MY GOSH I WANT MY FIRST DATE TO BE WITH YOU AAAAAHHH!!!

:) :) :)