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phinnia

frosting (pg-13)

Sep 09, 2010 20:47

title: frosting
author: phinnia
rating: pg-13
fandom: doctor who
pairing: ten II/rose (human!ten/rose)
prompt: 'type: glossy' for kissbingo.
disclaimer: a wandering minstrel i, a thing of shreds and patches. i own nothing.
author's note: never written these two before, but the first bit wouldn't leave me alone. so.
( even at times like this, he can't help but look at her. )

dr. who, fanfic

Comments 10

sarahj2222 September 10 2010, 04:49:46 UTC

This is great but thanks, as always, for reminding me of
the Mikado!!!! Sarah

phinnia September 10 2010, 20:14:28 UTC

you're welcome. <3 <3

thanks!

develish1 September 10 2010, 21:50:40 UTC

ooh, nice work. you write these two very well, I'd like to read more

phinnia September 10 2010, 22:39:26 UTC

thank you! <3<3 i'm glad you enjoyed it! <3

housemaid79 September 10 2010, 22:36:34 UTC

So, this may sound like an odd compliment, but I really like how concentrated this is. You manage to communicate so much in fewer than 500 words, and it feels complete, which takes talent. :)

phinnia September 10 2010, 22:39:01 UTC

thank you! <3 i don't think it's an odd compliment at all; it's a rather nice one. <3 i appreciate it! <3 <3

thenakedcupcake September 11 2010, 01:57:27 UTC

"Frosting and Rose, he thinks, and fidgets."

Oh I LOVE this. I love the idle image at the end, that antsy not-quite-finished feeling used as an ending. Lovely.

phinnia September 11 2010, 04:15:36 UTC

thank you! <3 <3

othermewriter September 12 2010, 02:10:07 UTC

yummm our poor doctor. He so needs his Rose.

phinnia September 12 2010, 03:35:22 UTC

yeah. yeah, he kinda does. :)
thanks for reading! <3<3