Erogenous Zones (ten/jack, nc-17)

[phinnia]

Title: Erogenous Zones
Author: phinnia
Prompt: kiss_bingo: body: wrists
Disclaimer: A wandering minstrel i, a thing of shreds and patches. I own nothing.
Pairing: ten/jack
Rating: NC-17
Author's note: More in the still-unnamed AU. comes after ' Saturday Night's Alright' but can be read alone. All you need to know is a) COE didn't happen and 2) Ten is

Comments

[sahiya]

*fans self* Damn. You write such AMAZING porn.

[silvermoon07]

This was absolutely gorgeous and so very sensual! I do love the way you write Ten/Jack, it's so sweet and heartwarming, and also very hot and sexy. :D

I loved how Ten kissed, licked and bit all of Jack's erogenous zones, making him come undone from his tender ministrations, that was really beautiful and sexy, and just so very Ten with his magnificent oral fixation. Ten making Jack have his orgasm just from his mouth and his gorgeous long fingered hand wanking him was wonderful, and so perfect. Hehehe.

The end part was so deliciously wicked, with Jack using his mouth to give Ten the most intense orgasm, and I loved it all to bits.

Thank you so much, you did a brilliant job with this part as well, and I am truly looking forward to reading whatever you write next with this pairing. I've saved this part to my memories as well, thanks again, sweetie. *grins*

[wendymr]

Oh, very nice - and the tenses are perfect this time :)

[scifiangel]

Holly hell, that was scorching hot! I love all the little details you put into this.

[littlemissgg]

YAYAYAYAYYAYYYYYY!!!! Phinnia pornz! I'm just now catching up and reading all of these and I don't even read these two but it's YOU and i LOVE it! :D