[Death Note] [Mello/Hal] bye-bye, security deposit

Apr 01, 2009 07:25

Once again, I am cutting it down to the wire with these 30_kisses thingies. ^_^;; And, because I'm completely insane, I've also claimed Yamamoto/Gokudera from Reborn. 'Cause I love them so~. &hearts

Title: bye-bye, security deposit
Series: Death Note
Pairing: Hal, the SPK; implied Mello/Hal.
Prompt: #24 - goodnight @ 30_kisses.
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: 650
Notes: ( Read more... )

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starlightfairy2 April 1 2009, 15:11:34 UTC
I liked it.~

It had such a bad ass feel to it. Something I haven't seen in a while. I believe her behavior is the way it is because of Mello being gone, am I right?

Aw, poor Hal though. *Sniff.*

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phishy April 1 2009, 22:56:06 UTC
Yep, your theory is dead on!

I never really saw Hal as the type to snap, go crazy, or anything, but I thought it might be interesting to explore a gradual, downhill spiral. Anyway... *offers tissues*

Thank you for reading! &hearts

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starlightfairy2 April 2 2009, 16:41:34 UTC
I SHIP THEM SO HARD.

(Hugs.) It's nice to see someone who agress with me. They're smexy together.

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anonymous April 27 2009, 16:42:31 UTC
Well.......let me start with the good things first.

This piece was very well written, as expected. I don´t need to mention how well you´ve captured the mood, do I ?

Halle is, in my humble opinion, one those sidecharacters you really want to know more of. She has that whole no shit/badass/feminine attitude.

And I like that.

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So, what are the bad things then?

I´m sure you can guess, seeing how long I´ve been waiting for you to write another Hal/Mello fanfic......MELLO------I´ve missed his presence DAMN IT!

Now you WILL have to write me another Hal/Mello story! One in which they have (at least) one conversation.

I´ll be waiting another year if that´s what it takes.

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phishy May 6 2009, 03:07:24 UTC
Thanks! I'm flattered that you've been following these things... pretty much since I started, yeah? Which was, like, 2 years ago, haha. For serious. It means a lot that someone has a sustained interest in my stuff, even though the LJ Death Note fandom has sort of fizzled out.

So. Much love! &hearts

And don't worry. My next one will not take an entire year, and yeah, there will be actual interaction in the future. Possibly, even quasi-porn. So, yeah.

Thanks again, for your unwavering faith, even if it takes the form of threat! XD

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anonymous May 14 2009, 21:35:58 UTC
Hahaha------no, don´t be frightened! I really am a very friendly person, honest.

It´s simply passion that got me to write like that. I always try to type the way I react---though there are so many misunderstandings when the internet is involved.....

And hey, it doesn´t have to be semi- or even quaterporn! I´m really not into THAT.

I simply like reading good pieces with them- simply conversing, or....whatever.

Weeeell.......I´ll stop by again.

(what´s the best H/M story you´ve come acros so far? Just curious)

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