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008; Mismatched

Aug 18, 2009 15:53

Title: Mismatched
Author:phobiaplague
Pairing: Heine/Badou
Rating: PG-13

Summary: Badou's misplaced his cigarettes. Again. When Heine comes calling, things go from bad to worse for Badou's already off day.

Comments: I decided to go ahead and try something a little more lighthearted this time around, to make up for my heavier drabble earlier. I'm still getting the ( Read more... )

fanfiction; dogs: bullets & carnage

Comments 2

evilgeniuskoji August 19 2009, 00:59:31 UTC

This was absolutely hilarious, baby. I especially loved the part where both their shadows became dogs and Badou's was completely cowed by Heine's.

The bit where Badou's door is literally in pieces now and Heine smirking over Badou's "butt-fucking-pocket-" makes me gleam and snicker. As does the cigarette-killing.

Congratulations on getting your muse back. Maybe all along what you needed was a change of scenery. Your characterization is great, you've done awesome.

phobiaplague August 19 2009, 01:18:43 UTC

Aw, thank you, love. I'm glad you thought so. Oh yeah? I'm glad. I decided that would be fitting/add an extra comical edge to it.

That part was fun to write. And yes, Badou just has a really bad habit of saying the wrong thing to/around Heine. Heine was mean to him!

Thanks, babe. I'm relieved it isn't totally gone. Probably, now that you mention it. Thank you~.