The first Drarry oneshot

[phoenix089]

 I tried to promise myself I wouldn't get to the writing-point in the Drarry fandom but ... I suppose it was inevitable I'd get to the point...

And, by re-watching the movies with my new Drarry goggles, I'm seeing new possibilities, and this was inspired by my own cracky thoughts while watching Chamber of Secrets.
What was the said cracky thought

Comments

[vavikingwoman]

I like the peek into the mind of young Draco. It is interesting to see the possibility that Draco's infatuation with Harry started years and years ago. I think you did a great job with the characterizations. It was also fun to see Goyle has some depth to him. :)

[phoenix089]

It was certainly interesting to try and write Young Draco too, so I'm glad you liked that.
Fff. Please, Draco has always been infatuated with Harry, even when he was breaking Potter's nose in sixth year ... It was only because he just needed to touch him. The fact that it was foot to face was irrelevant XDDD I'm in a cracky mood, sorry XD

I'm really happy you liked the characterizations! That's one thing I always worry about with Fanfics...
Ah, that was my favourite aspect too. I just like the idea of Goyle having more to him than his hulking mass. I just feel there's more to Goyle than we ever got to know =)

Also! Thankyou for the add! <33

Crabbe & Goyle

[martinstjohn]

I've seen more than one story using Crabbe & Goyle as a committed couple, or where they've been pretending to be stupid so the Dark Lord wouldn't notice them... Other characters I'd like to see pursued more include the Centaurs, Bill & Charlie, Molly, early Minerva... anyway, this was a good bunny and you crafted it well. Good job, enjoyed your story.

Re: Crabbe & Goyle

[phoenix089]

There have been a few fic's I've read where Crabbe and Goyle are in a relationship, and I must admit I like the idea ... But, because of the debacle in the Room of Requirement being Crabbe's doing ... I just don't know that I can see him only pretending to be stupid to avoid detection. He was, after all, the one to turn on Draco first. ... I might be holding a grudge against him for that though, haha ^^;

Oh, the centaurs would be fascinating to read about. As would Bill post-werewolf attack and younger-Minerva. Someone I'd like to know more about is actually Dudley - How does he react after the Dursley's left Harry during Deathly Hallows? I remember reading in one fic that he found out where Harry lived and sent him a simple note saying that he hopes he's still alive ... The idea kind of stuck with me. Could Harry and Dudley have a different relationship outside of Vernon's eye?? *thinking*

Aaaanyway, thanks! I'm glad you liked this little crack-addled bunny XD

[lisbet]

I really love what you did with Goyle's character! Also nice that we get a glimpse into Draco's mind early in the series. I especially like how Draco doesn't reveal his feelings to anyone. He just watches Harry, and thinks about him, and doesn't even admit to himself what that might mean. It's wonderful pre-slash!

[phoenix089]

And I really love your Icon! <3

I had fun messing around with Goyle XD And Draco, for that matter. Trying to put myself into his mind during those years proved interesting, so I'm glad you appreciated the attempt <3

Thanks for the comment - I'm glad you liked it! =D

[phoenix089]

>///< Thankyou!
I'm glad you liked it <3

[geneva2010]

Rarely do I see any fic that occurs before 5th or possibly 4th year. Bravo for attempting 2nd year, and the idea was very sound. Definitely Draco could have put Dobby up to the whole thing. I really empathized with Draco's sense of powerlessness while McGonagal and Dumbledore send them to the dorms, and call them back and send them away again, without any explanations about what is going on. For an intelligent, involved player in the whole mess that would be really hard and frustrating. Good job!

[phoenix089]

5th would be interesting, considering Draco's on the IS and all with Umbridge Ulterior motives to protect Harry from that demon? *w*
I thought it was, haha. I mean ... If Dobby were ordered not to let Harry even begin to think it was Draco ... ? Totally plausible >3

Oh, I can't even begin to image how difficult that night must have been for those in the know. I mean, imagine how Fred/George and Percy were feeling that night. Their sister and their little brother were both missing at that point ... Though, I imagine McGonagall had told them at least the truth ... Though that wouldn't have made it better!!

... And now I'm thinking too much, haha!!
I'm glad you liked the drabble <33