UlquiHime Smut - Threads to Unravel
Teeth bit into her lower lip as she attempted to hold in a barely suppressed moan of appreciation. Ulquiorra had just walked into their shared apartment, having returned from a job interview, and Orihime was completely unable to tear her eyes away.
She wasn’t sure what it was that was fuelling her sudden desire exactly. It might have been the way ( Read more... )
She wasn’t sure what it was that was fuelling her sudden desire exactly. It might have been the way ( Read more... )
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For all the "I can't get inside the character's head" troubles you've been having, I thought that was actually quite well written. ;)
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I'm glad you enjoyed it Kitty - I do feel off with my writing, so I'm relieved that didn't show ... Maybe it's just all in my head? XDD
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Hot, IC, and just UNF. I feel your writing style changed a little as well, your UH fics have gotten so good, improved so much omg. <33333333
Ulquiorar smiling threw me out a few times XD But I took it as a smirk tho >8)
but ffff I can't wait to see what else you post, as well as what you do for the contest! ♥
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Has it? Haha. I didn't even notice XDD <3 I'm really happy that you think I've improved though. I've been feeling like I'm going backwards with writing lately soooo ... I'm glad to hear that isn't the case ^^;
Ah. That smile ... I really should have added something to that line. It wasn't meant to be a full-blown smile, more ... Ulquiorra's almost-there-but-not-quite-smile XDD A smirk works though, haha!
Fufufu. I'd best get my act together and start writing then~ Still pondering over the what though, cos there are Pronz I want to write, but I don't think they're contest-quality XDD
Again, I'm happy you like this Issues *Huuuuug*
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Yeah I feel that same way sometimes, but I think you really have developed your own style, and your characterization is so. <3 *3*
XD I figured, but I had to mention it lmao.
well you have 2 months, take your time. <333333
*hugs* I love it *3*
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I mean really... hot damn!
I love how you write these two, so so much. So you totally sidetracked me when I noticed an entry from you that was a story in my inbox, then noticed it was UlquiOri smut and was very glad no one else was around, because I forgot about the world until it was read.
Now I gotta go check out this new community.
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That makes me happier than you could ever know to hear, and I'm exponentially glad to hear that you love me writing them, because I do love writing these two <33
I feel I should apologise for disappearing for a while there though, I was/am having this horrible writers block. I get part way through a story ... And then I just get stuck. It's really annoying, but, I'm hoping I'm almost through it - Which means, more writing will be on the way. There will be! *determined*
I'm glad I was able to draw you in to the smut so completely that the world vanished though XD
And yes! I really encourage you to check out the comm! It's still new, as in only just opened a few days ago, but two extremely awesome people run it and, hopefully, there will be alot of smut to come <3
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Yea, stories don't usually suck me in that far, but this one did! Hot damn, Ulqui in a suit...
Anyways! Checked out the comm last night and I think I managed to put it on my watch list, so I'm looking forwards to what all will show up. I'm also debating trying, though I swore not to write anything until I can finally finish the multi-chaptered Naruto one I've been working on for, what? 4 years now? T_T Almost done, as long as the writers block stopps hitting every chapter...
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