Soul and Centre

[phoenix_flash]

Done for the latest challenge at 15_minute_fic

Title: Soul and Centre
Fandom/original: Original
Rating: PG13 for swearing~?
Word count: 506

Comments

[kodufiction]

Just... fuck, darling~ You write so well. The imagery captivates me - it feels like a novel, better than a novel. Funny, descriptive, and there's this underlying... something that's almost sad, almost melancholy, but not quite. Too angry, too funny to be anything but amusing.

It's like... "layers" to the story. You're writing one thing, and I'm feeling another thing, because it's as if you've written in that emotion so discreetly, it's only a hint of a flavor instead of the main dish.

So good. *O*

[phoenix_flash]

Thanks baby~ I'm still trying to coax my muse out of hiding, so hopefully a few more of these will get the ball rolling nicely again X3 ♥