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Help Wanted

Feb 25, 2009 18:18

Title: Help Wanted
Author: ladytalon1
Fandom: Stargate: SG-1
Starring: Aris Boch, Baal clone(s)
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Stargate: SG-1 is the property of MGM, and I am making no money from this dubious work of fiction.
A/N: for the phoenix_gate Prompta-Thingathon. Prompt - 133. bodyguard
Word Count: 823

( this is what having children must be like )

fanworks: fic, fanworks, !round 1

Comments 14

mornincamper February 27 2009, 17:19:24 UTC

oh LOL. A Boch for every Baal!

(there's a pun in there somewhere)

This was great!

ladytalon1 February 27 2009, 18:04:49 UTC

That's a great slogan!

I'd taken the prompt with thoughts of doing something serious and angst-y, but this happened instead, lol. Thanks for the comment, and I'm glad you liked it :)

ryf February 27 2009, 17:48:21 UTC

Heh, I liked this! Very funny and I love the way you write Aris.

Aris imagines that this is what having children must be like and any pangs for the decimation of his sperm count are lost within an overwhelming wave of relief.

:D

ladytalon1 February 27 2009, 18:14:08 UTC

Thank you, Aris is always a hoot to write. I like to think that his experience with Aris is the main reason Baal can't stand Jack O'Neill :D

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advection February 27 2009, 18:10:29 UTC

I do this all the time here (it's what drives me bonkers about this layout), but just want to let you know: Your reply to ryf posted to the main entry instead of to her comment.

Bonkers. Totally bonkers. I may talk to jd_junkie about disabling customized comments pages for the comm, because, bonkers, man.

ladytalon1 February 27 2009, 18:13:46 UTC

Damn, so I *did* do it - I wasn't sure and was wondering if I should simply delete it and re-comment... thanks for the heads-up.

ryf February 27 2009, 18:35:54 UTC

I did that once at my own post here today as well :)

advection February 27 2009, 18:07:57 UTC

Oh, man, I love this. Aris and Baal are just pitch-perfect, and there is so much wonderful humor in this, and there are so many great observations. A pleasure to read!

ladytalon1 February 27 2009, 18:15:56 UTC

Thanks, this was a lot of fun :D I want to claim another fic prompt, but I also need to get busy with my other 2 claims.... oh, the decisions.

chattycatsmeow February 28 2009, 04:06:57 UTC

Hee!I love hearing Aris' point of view and the ending was very funny. Nice take on the prompt.

ladytalon1 March 7 2009, 17:48:45 UTC

Thanks! Aris is so much fun to write, as is Baal - theirs are POVs that definitely need to be taken much more often :D