[1016] I really ought to be in bed

Mar 28, 2010 01:15

But I'm not. Why am I not in bed? Because it's 1:10 a.m. and that means I have more zombie fic for you. I reject your reality and substitute my own!

Original drabble by askerian

Act IAct II
Scene I, Sasuke
Scene I, Naruto
Scene II, Shikamaru
Scene II, Sasuke
Scene III, Neji
Scene III, Tenten
Scene IV, Tenten
Scene IV, Sakura
Scene V, Lee
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neji, zombies

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flourite_roses March 30 2010, 14:01:19 UTC
♥ Tenten! I didn't really watch Naruto all that much (only about the first 150-200 eps) but what I've seen so far is that Tenten seems to be the most unused character. She seemed to be created solely for the purpose of filling in an empty female slot on Neji and Lee's team. *is much saddened by her unused character :(*

Ah, em, anyway, Tenten! She has some scenes here! W00ts~ Hope Neji is alright. He has to be, right? Right?? Tenten is there! And Shikamaru! And Lee! D: They will protect him! But I do so hope he ran over more than two zombies. Cuz, y'know, that's kinda pathetic. -.-l|

A side note tho, the last couple of paragraphs took a couple of read-throughs for me to get. I don't know if it's because I'm currently kinda stoned (URGH prep camps and nightwalks that lasted waaay longer than it promised to) or I'm just slow that way. I can't really suggest anything about it though, sorry. =/

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phoenix_melody March 30 2010, 23:31:53 UTC
Neji did run over more than two zombies. You'll find out what exactly happened in the next piece. Now, whether all of them survive, that's another matter entirely. ♥

It's not just you that was confused about the last paragraphs. My roommate pointed out they were a bit sketchy, and now that it's not one a.m. I can see that it was more confusing than I meant it to be. Maybe I'll go back at some point and actually edit these pieces. Or maybe not.

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flourite_roses March 31 2010, 06:08:08 UTC
Yay! Hope he ran over all of them idiot things. ♥ Oh Neji. I ♥ you. I also ♥ the mention of a next piece. Watch the spam of ♥s! I ♥ ♥s!

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phoenix_melody April 1 2010, 04:18:21 UTC

hiza_chan March 30 2010, 17:20:18 UTC
Oh my God, I've been out of town for the last couple of days so I hadn't seen this but wow. I am so excited that this is getting more action! And Asuka doesn't mind? Cause that's fantastic. I agree though, evil, evil, EVIL ending. Crossing my fingers for more

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phoenix_melody March 30 2010, 23:33:22 UTC
I'm pleased that you've enjoyed the ride so far! I've got at least one piece left in me--as for after that, we'll have to see.

Asuka doesn't seem to mind so far--she's been very enthusiastic about what I've written. Or it could be that she's an excellent actress. >.>

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phoenix_melody April 1 2010, 04:18:46 UTC

chromde March 31 2010, 19:40:49 UTC
Cliffhanger ending!

It made me so happy to bump into Tenten. If Itachi is my brother in a zombie apocalypse, Tenten is part of my group. You better bet she'd kick butt.

Another great addition to the zombie verse. (And yay, Neji.)

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phoenix_melody March 31 2010, 23:58:18 UTC
I ♥ cliffhangers sometimes. >D

Tenten is awesome. I'd love to have her on my side during a zombie apocalypse, too.

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phoenix_melody April 1 2010, 04:18:59 UTC

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