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Stranger Under My Roof - Epilogue

Aug 23, 2015 03:53

Title: Stranger Under My Roof (epilogue)
Pairing: Kyuhyun/Yesung, YeKyu, KyuSung.
Genre: Drama, angst, fluff.
Warnings: Slight coarse language, mention of alcohol
Rating: PG-13
Summary: They say that what a person wants most in the world is the one thing they are deprived of. Kyuhyun has been deprived of Jongwoon’s affection for far too long.

( Time stops around them )

fandom: suju, fanfic, character: kyuhyun, character: yesung, pairing: kyuhyun/yesung

Comments 5

junnosukex3 August 23 2015, 09:07:39 UTC

That was a wonderful epilogue !
Fun and sweet ^^

I'm kind of glad you didn't use the accident because my poor little heart wouldn't have born it !

I like the way it ends, without too much information about their future relationship. It's up to our imagination and it's nice !

Thanks for this story !

bookworm83197 August 24 2015, 07:04:49 UTC

Yay, you finished the story! ^^
I think I found LiveJournal around the time that chapter 2 came out, haha. XD Your writing is always so amazing and your characters are always so well-written :)
Thank you for finishing this story! ^^

sparksfly7 August 26 2015, 06:07:13 UTC

Aww this was really sweet, thanks for writing and posting it! I opened the link for Ch 6 and--wow, it's been a really long time, haha. I didn't even realize.

I like how all the members gang up on them to tease them. It may be embarrassing for Jongwoon and Kyuhyun, but you can tell how relieved and happy the other guys are that they have a good relationship now. And Jungsoo being this proud parental figure is so cute. Also, I like what you did with the Super Junior-M members and Jongwoon not wanting to make the same mistake. I think it's good that you didn't use the accident because, like you said, it deviates from the direction of this fic.

Jongwoon and Kyuhyun have come so far, it's almost unbelievable. But you did it in a very believable and realistic way. Kudos to you for finishing off such a great fic!

allspecialsmile August 26 2015, 10:43:28 UTC

OH. MY. GOD. ARVY ( ... )

degnoojosan August 26 2015, 12:53:25 UTC

I can't with this.

Man, this story is one of my favourites in the YeKyu fandom, and having a wrapping up is sweet

a hell of a wrapping, I must add, I laughed a lot, the SJ-bullies add was by far the best, and oh
Kim HeeChul "having the subtlety and tact of a raging rhinoceros with a hernia."

Long life to Kim HeeChul

My only complain is actually a whim

we all know where they arrived at the end, but still, my voyeuristic side craved for their first /real/ kiss.

I know it's still far away in the story, so maybe it was impossible, but I got that little disapointment inside.

However, the childish part aside, the chapter is wonderful

Thank you for finishing it. You are totally asking me to read it all over once again.

(PS. I owe you the comment in the other fic... don't give up on that one either, please)