Fallen Angel Scene 3/?

[phoenix_wrock]

Alright next installment. I'm debating adding more to the scene. Like when Brad, Adam, and Kris return, but i'm not sure. There might be one more scene in act 1 which may deal with the aftermath of what has happened. Let me know what you think.

Comments

[slythrn_barnbum]

I don't think you should add more to the scene. It gives Penny and Michael a good point in the start to their story without it being too sullied by Brad's return. It's like the light at the end of the tunnel kinda deal, as though Penny is just properly realizing that there is a bright spot in all the darkness.

You are doing amazing with this, though. Keep writing, and let me know as you update (since I'm absolutely awful checking my LJ anymore).