Fallen Angel Scene 4

[phoenix_wrock]

Okay, Newest scene. Thanks for the feedback. I'm not sure I like this scene as it is written. I feel like I need to change it. I'll wait to write the whole thing before I fully decide. No point in rewriting a scene that may actually work in the end. This scene will end Act 1 and I have started act 2 but I am now stuck, again. So we'l see where this

Comments

[slythrn_barnbum]

Very sweet! Definitely adds to the act without making it too easy for the characters to move on, knowing Brad is still there, even when they're trying to.