Scenes 6 & 7

[phoenix_wrock]

This is the end. I have finished writing the rough draft. It is 52 pages long. I am unsure if I like the ending monologue. I want to add more, I like it as is, and I want to get rid of it all at the same time. Ideas?

Comments

[slythrn_barnbum]

I like the ending. I think it sums things up really nicely, making sure to mention Penny doesn't ever forget Mike, and that he is always on her mind.

I'm glad you shared this story with us, and that you were able to get it out on paper (so to speak). Let me know if/when you get others up!

[phoenix_wrock]

I'm glad you liked it. I will probably be adding more to it.
Thanks for all your feedback.