Wee, 15039!! I'm 39 words ahead!! Ha ha.

[phoenixeiros]

Dear Musashi,

Maahh. There's much with the angst in this segment. And not a whole lot happens, just foreshadowing, the answering of some questions (if y'all didn't guess by now) and the raising of some new questions. So. Yeah.

Comments

[tastelikeapples]

I like the angst. I think it works really well. And it made me like Rhodon a lot more - kind of a humanizing effect.

Some of my favorite lines:

They never asked to be created, any more than we asked to be changed.

And ...

“I’m living vicariously through your craziness.”

Particularly the second one, but I think the first one proves that you're pretty damn good with the lines your ownself. So there. ^_^

[phoenixeiros]

Wee! I have lines! I wanted to have some cool lines.

I'm glad you found it to be humanizing on Rhodon. I think it would be great if I could give backstory for all my characters, but I think that would get too Naruto-ish of everyone being an angst bitch. And that would be bad. Only because I've already drawn from X-men, Dark Angel, Firefly, Paradise Lost, Anne Bishop, and apparently Justice League.

Adding Naruto would be a bit much.

[aestusargenteus]

Yeah, you totally need angst here. I really, really liked it.

And yay for foreshadowing :)

[phoenixeiros]

:P I'm glad you guys found the angst necessary and working well, and I'm even more pleased by the fact that you guys liked it. You'll tell me when the angst gets too much, right?

Thanks!

[aestusargenteus]

Of course we will... what else is family for?