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Apr 03, 2005 15:13

Life/death... yes... Schivo ( Read more... )

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moannamuppet April 7 2005, 22:43:19 UTC
You explained yourself quite well. There is a little I disagreed with; but I don't really have the time to go into it right now.
I complete get the mixed up, topsey-turvey feelings though. I just wanted to say you explained yourself very well in your sentences; the only thing I would change is the structure. Put down the arguements for the husband all in one spot, then above or below that put all the arguments against him. Same with the family. Finally putting your own two cents in on generalities and personal preferences at the end of your entry. However, since my own personal entry on the subject was a bit muddled as well I'm hardly one to talk about structurizing an emotional release.

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phoenixrysin April 12 2005, 02:00:37 UTC
Thank you, I think it may have come out a bit more clearly had I considered a structured method of writing it down, espeically had I done so in the way you describe. I was honestly not going to write as much as I did, but the more I thought about it, the more came to mind.. and the more i wrote. Truly, it was as I thought of it, that I wrote most of this down, without thinking it all out prior to posting it. I think writing it down became my outward method of internalizing and processing the situation as a whole. After writing what i had, I could probably come back, and write it again much more carefully and accurately. But, thank you... I always wonder what people think when I go off about random topics like this.

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