Writers and Writing

[phoenixsworn]

The bright slash of light stood out brilliantly against the dark walls of the castle. The congregation gaped in shock as a young woman, no more than twenty, fell out of the light. She had a thick braid of straight black hair hanging down her back, and her faded black outfit was torn so that it bared her midriff. Though it was neatly stitched and

Comments

[facit]

I like it...

[elysianspoof]

Good skill with the descriptions.