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Sep 11, 2010 20:54

Defibrillation
2NE1
no pairing, Bom-centric
zombie AU, for the sept. unniefic challenge.

National heroes, cleansing the rotting streets of Old Seoul, bringing the land back to its people. Casualty rate of 70%. )

challenge/exchange

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preponderating September 12 2010, 06:05:35 UTC
i like this a lot! i love your take on this cliche, and the way you've characterized everyone (especially cl). really good job!

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phonebook September 12 2010, 06:49:55 UTC
thanks! this is my first time writing 2ne1, so I'm glad the characterizations worked for you. :)

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punkgesture September 13 2010, 03:41:08 UTC
i rly like this. i like the straightforward style of your writing here, and how you wrote the relationship among the four of them. plus i can never resist zombie AUs

Even though her skin was losing color and she was already starting to smell like one of them, the will to live charging through her veins would have made the psych examiner proud. And maybe, she thought, this was what the zombies were. Just corpses defibrillated by the high-voltage desire to keep walking.
my favorite part!

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phonebook September 13 2010, 05:38:54 UTC
thanks for reading! i'm also very weak for zombie aus, haha. ♥

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riiche January 7 2011, 09:09:02 UTC
So in love with you right now, I can't even.

It's been such an awful day and reading this made me want to cry, but there's something incredibly calm and beautiful about the way Bom is handling her impending doom. Their strength throughout the situation is more heartbreaking than any emotional breakdown.

“Nothing. Happened,” Chaerin snapped, her eyes trained straight ahead.
...I thought she was bring a hardass, but as I read on I'm just, guh, CL ♥ And your Bom, her backstory and her determination, I'm just so--it was all perfect, oh my god. I love the characterization and I love the universe. The mood. Everything.

tl;dr please write more 2NE1 ♥ This was just awesome, I love it so much. ;__;

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phonebook January 7 2011, 18:23:20 UTC
So when I saw this comment I had to just stare for a moment lol, I kind of adore everything you write? js

I'm always crazy flattered when somebody has an emotional response to something I've written, and particularly since this was my first foray into these girls and there was a lot of balking over whether I was digging deep enough, thank you xinfinity for reading and for your kind words. ♥ I could write 2ne1 for the rest of my life and still never quite exhaust my interest in them, tbh. tl;dr: working on it! (:

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rikaaki June 5 2011, 14:43:12 UTC
Thk you for writing this :*... I really love it, I haven't read any 2NE1 fic. It's my first and also my favourite one.

I want to translate it into VNese, and can I have your permission to upload it on other website?

Hope you reply soon

P/s: Sr for my bad English :")

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intendedsarcasm June 12 2011, 03:19:02 UTC
She had the best aim with long-range weapons among all female trainees, although she had failed the tactical exam due to “absent mindedness”.
aw, that does sound like bom :)

omg the ending was perfect ;~;

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