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Jan 12, 2011 20:14

Flux 
Minho/Luna
PG-13, 3776
Learn to love what you're stuck to.

(for firequakes for unniesanta)

Sunyoung didn't like Physics )

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nautisch January 13 2011, 06:20:37 UTC
I love your style in this. the immature part of me laughed at the headers of each section (so clever!) and then there were just some sentences that really showed that you thought about how they sounded and how they made the story sound. that's a horribly incoherent explanation but what I mean is that I love the way this was written, and I love minluna, and I love this. sob.

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phonebook January 14 2011, 04:35:45 UTC
Ah, thank you! That's a perfectly coherent explanation and also something I'm really flattered to hear, since I definitely took advantage of the posting delay to do some revision lol. I'm basically in love with minluna too, so I'm glad you liked it. ♥

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ladadadi January 13 2011, 08:33:23 UTC
this fic is so adorable. and i laughed irl at the anatomy lesson lol. i really like the style of this, how it's sort of awkward but in a way that reflects the tension between them. i think the last section is my favorite, i love every word in it. plus this whole idea is very original, i've never seen anything like it in any fandom i've been in. basically this is great and it's turned me into an inarticulate mess lol.

also if i'm understanding correctly, things got mixed up and this was actually written for my prompt? it's unfortunate that that happened, but i really love this :)

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phonebook January 14 2011, 04:44:53 UTC
LOL yes, that would be the bright side: you got two fics! OTL Although I am regrettably not as swayed by sad faces, I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :D ♥

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compatable January 13 2011, 12:35:45 UTC
wow, i am just blown away. god, this is amazing. and i didn't even know why people shipped minluna so much, but their dynamics could be like this irl.

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phonebook January 14 2011, 04:45:53 UTC
Oh wow, thanks! ♥ I feel like they actually have a lot in common, in terms of insecurity and needing to prove themselves, so it's a pair that really interests me. :3

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punkgesture January 14 2011, 21:28:44 UTC
this is ttly how i view minho and luna to be: two endearingly fumbly people just trying to find their own accepting niche

gahh i am just seriously in love with everything you write

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phonebook January 19 2011, 05:46:47 UTC
go ahead lj, just stop notifying me of comments, that's cool i guess.

I'm really glad that I managed to get across the self-conscious fumbling because that is totally how I see them too. n__n and thank you so much! I had a lot of issues with this fic tbh so I'm relieved I didn't disappoint. ♥

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incessance January 25 2011, 19:45:33 UTC
oh goodness. this was such an amazing piece to read. the juxtaposition of college!au with the electricity quirk worked really well, and i was just kind of flailing in amazement as i went through the entire piece.

i think i just failed my physics exam today, but this kind of makes up for it. :D

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