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[photobscura]

Hi, I want to start working on my art portfolio for school and I'm thinking about doing some pictures that have words that are visible, but don't distract you from the picture. I just wanted to ask if the picture I did do that with look tacky. And if it did, how to improve that.

This is the first one. The original copy.

Comments

[missdapples]

i cant read the words, and sashas eyes are closed!!

but, i think the words should be a little more visable because i didnt even notice them at first until i read what you wrote above it...
unless thats what you were going for

[photobscura]

well i dunno yet. i want the words to be a little visible. but i'm not sure if i want you to be able to read them.

[photobscura]

thanks :)

[eyesonstars]

I can barely see the words...I can slightly see them in the upper right. It looks as if you were writing something on paper over it and the pressure of the pen/pencil went through the paper and marked your photo.

[_action__action]

I like that you can't really see the words unless your really concentrating, I think it makes it mysterious.

[noiseattack]

I think her eyes should be open.
Other than that I like it (: