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photoflood

Dec 08, 2005 23:02

sugar snap peas & pine trees ( Read more... )

Comments 8

crystalthoughts December 9 2005, 21:14:26 UTC

I'm worried about you. I'm going to call sometime this weekend, okay?

photoflood December 13 2005, 20:18:18 UTC

i've been away. i called you back, no answer.

belle_minceur December 10 2005, 21:06:24 UTC

"my spine twisting, stalling
bruised conversation"
That made me flinch.

photoflood December 13 2005, 20:17:48 UTC

in a good way, or a not so good way?

belle_minceur December 16 2005, 02:50:15 UTC

In a "you described it so well I could feel it" way.

aerodrome1 December 18 2005, 22:48:17 UTC

I love this poem.

photoflood December 19 2005, 00:10:17 UTC

yeah, it's not the worst thing i've ever written, but i still think the ending is very weak. maybe someday i'll give it a proper ending.

aerodrome1 December 19 2005, 00:46:43 UTC

I'll keep an eye out for a revised version.