Rites of Spring, Arthur/Merlin fic

[phreakycat]

Merlin dies in the spring, just as the snow is receding from the land.

Arthur replays the moment in his mind for weeks afterward, wounding his heart with the memory.  Merlin’s hand raised, eyes golden like sunfire and full of love.  The scent of ozone and spring earth as the witch’s power meets with Merlin’s and pushes him down.

Merlin’s voice,

Comments

[kylezy]

I'm normally not an emotional person but this made me teary! Arthur's heartbreak was so defined and even though I knew Merlin's absence was temporary, I found myself holding my breath with hope as if I had no clue what was about to happen.

Really well written and killer last line too!

[phreakycat]

Aw, thanks! *gives you a tissue* I'm glad the emotion came through on it. I have NO idea where this came from, because normally I stay far away from character deaths (even temporary ones!), but it was fun to try out a different style and gratifying to hear it worked for you. Thanks for the feedback!

[phreakycat]

Wow - thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

[phys_nut]

awww, this was beautiful! the image of arthur going out to gather herbs for gaius is lovely, and i love how they're reuinited at the end!!

[phreakycat]

Thanks! We all know Arthur is a big softie at heart, right? :)

[misc_plinks]

Waiting to see if he will be a king, or a broken man beneath a crown. <--That line, so gorgeous! There's probably a better word to describe it, but that's the best I can come up with on the spot^^

[phreakycat]

Thank you! Im really glad you liked it, and thanks for taking the time to point out what worked for you! :)

[phreakycat]

Aw, thanks! I'm glad that even though I broke you you got glued back together! *hands you tissue and warm coco* And thanks for adding me to your memories - I'm honored!