Sweet and Delectable, Chapter 3

Jun 08, 2010 17:32

Title: Sweet and Delectable
Author: Phreakycat
Rating: M
Pairing: Arthur/Merlin
Genre: Modern AU, romance, slash, some angst
Previous Chapters: Chapter One, Chapter Two

Warnings: Some violence in future chapters, eventual m/m Sexitimes. Shameless over-use of pastry metaphors. Graphic descriptions of baked goods and sugary concoctions. The very likely ( Read more... )

slash, fic, merlin

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phreakycat June 9 2010, 02:38:53 UTC
I hurt Merlin, I know - poor baby! *pets him not at all creepily*

Thanks for the comment! :)

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phreakycat June 9 2010, 02:39:39 UTC
*hands you cake with extra icing*
Sorry! I know - I'm cruel! But there WILL be more soon, I promise!

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nahara June 9 2010, 01:17:54 UTC
At first I was like :D

And then I was like D:

Great chapter, but poor besotted Merlin.

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phreakycat June 9 2010, 02:40:43 UTC
LOL!

Poor besotted Merlin, indeed!

PS: I applaud your usage of "besotted"!

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nahara June 9 2010, 10:36:31 UTC
Thanks for the applause. I'm often applauding my vocabulary. How could I not with words like 'precipitation' or 'verisimilitude' or 'badass'? They may not look like much now, but in context they're pretty fucking stellar. ;)

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phreakycat June 9 2010, 17:58:42 UTC
"Verisimilitude...." Oh, be still my heart! *swoons*

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ah_lisa June 9 2010, 01:18:39 UTC
...awh. Poor Merlin. Poor, poor besotted Merlin...

Though, okay, on a more optimistic note, I lit up like a Christmas tree when I saw this updated, haha. This part especially made me all happy: "But out here in the full light of the afternoon sun, Arthur looks, well… Merlin doesn’t even have a pastry simile to describe it." XDD Oh, Merlin. You and your pastry similes make my day.

Still wonderfully charming as always; thank you kindly for the quick update!

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phreakycat June 9 2010, 02:43:07 UTC
Aw, thanks! And another person uses "besotted"! Hurray for rarely-used but fun words! *claps*

So glad you're liking it!

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wit_worry_what June 9 2010, 01:23:44 UTC
That is horrible! Poor Merlin! I just want to wrap him up in a bug hug and cuddle him to death! ...Sorry, that got a bit weird.
Please update soon! This is sooo good!
w.w.w.

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phreakycat June 9 2010, 02:43:48 UTC
Thank you! There'll be an update soon, I promise. :)

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